Her Flux - Comments

I love all of your characters so much, and you could not have captured any better their speech. It's flawless and I am totally lost in it. Nathaniel is such a babe, haha.

KISS HER. KISS HER. KISS HER.
Gahhhhhhhhhddddd.

Wonderful update.

I agree with Dimli! :P
But I love this chapter!
They both should be able to figure out their feelings for one another by now!
He needs to just KISS HER already! :P
And Cecile, playing little matchmaker..I love her for that one! :D

Can't freaking wait until you update!
And that other story, I bet it'll be good too. :D

My new excuse for not wanting to dance: "It's shameful!"

I think I already said this, but I don't care: they are sooo tender....
Nathaniel is a sweetheart ( haha, now I sound like a granny...Xp) and Erica is so sweet and kind. I'd love to be like her: I'm always a bit lunatic, I change mood costantly, especially at home...

Aww, that was a really cute chapter! I love how Erica and Nathanial have bonded a little more, while talking about things like marriage. Ooh, how exciting!
I also really loved the part where Nathanial was telling Erica about all of the 'bad' things that he has done and she was pretending to be shocked. Ahh, that put a smile on my face when he was telling of how he eavesdropped and such :)

Great update!

I'm on chapter twelve, I am almost caught up. All of your descriptions are mesmerizing and I swear I can see everything the way it is.

There are a couple spelling errors, "seam" instead of "seem" is a popular one. :)

I'll comment again when I get to the last update!

Your writing never fails to impress me.

How lucky I am to have found this awesome, interesting and excellent story. Your writing style is quick yet it mantains a good quality of description and doesn't bores. I will surely check out your other stories!

Yes you are awesome!

Oh my goodness! I adore 'Charmed'! It's one of my favorite shows.
Isn't that episode when they discover that their related to the pregnant woman? (:
I love how you incorporated the whitelighter thing to Erica!
And how you tweaked it was amazing!
That just made this story 2537354 times better! :DDD
It's a relief to have everything explained. :D

It's about time things got explained. :P
I think she'll break off her courtship. (:
OMG I can't believe it took this twist, I love it!
But only five chapters left? Gah!
I can't wait though. :DD

Oo! New story! :D I must say, I love your writing, dearie. :D

This is such a beautifully written story. I am so glad that I stumbled upon it and I have finally caught up with all of the published chapters. :)

Ah, I used to love 'Charmed'! When I first saw the story title, I was wondering if this story had any basis around that program (because I have also seen the episode that you mentioned in your Author's Note) and then when I read further, I thought there might be something about Erica being a witch. Therefore I was quite surprised when I found out that she was a whitelighter instead but I guess that fits in the story far better for her xD

I hope you update soon because I've already become addicted to this story!

WOW! I came to comment because yesterday I didn't have time and what I saw? two other chapters!!! you make me happy! Now we know what is happening with the glow and Erica...
Nathaniel came back! I hope Erica will broke her courtship with William because I can't stand him, there is really something off about him!

1) thank you Dimli!
2)and?
What do you have to sayyy? Love or hate?

I love this so far. It's fantastic!

Just as a side note, you might want to change all the "retorts" to "reply" or some other verb because usually "to retort" has a negative connotation and so does not seem fitting for a few sentences.

I also found out that reading other people's comments spoils the chapters I was unable to read for I'm about to fall asleep.

Fantastic writing!

Damn this William. Damn him. Damn him.
He's going to ruin everything. AND Nathaniel's uncle.
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GR!

Despite my frustration, I'm liking the story.
Still very well written and I REALLY can't wait until you update.
Oh and good luck with all your studying! (:

Beautiful story

I have a feeling that William character is going to cause a problem.
It'll be an interesting reunion when he returns.
And I think he's going to start asking questions more about the lives of the Providence family.

And I can't believe you updated TWO chapters since I've been on. :D I was like GAH!

As to your request; when I read your story I feel excitement along with frustration. But good frustration! I mean after all, it is a mystery. (; The excitement is reading it and trying to figure out what's going to happen next. And I'm very partial to this time period for stories. (: I hope this helps. :D

.... i have a feeling he's going to meet someone interesting in London....
:,(

:( aww man