Her Flux - Comments

I love Erica, and I really want to know about this light business! And I agree with Leap of Faith her parents, especially her mom, are suffocating her :[

I don't like Erica's parents very much. Especially not her mom.

Wow, your story is really good.
One of the ultamate best I've read on mibba so far!
But I'm new so that probably doesn't say much.
But seriously, it's really good.
It keeps you curious and interested along with being written well and actually having a detailed plot. That is what makes a story amazing.
Can't wait 'till next update now, haha. =D

I CANNOT wait for the next update, IT'S GONNA BE AWESOME!!! update soon women! xx :D

Oh I'm so excited you posted the next chapter! I loved it, your writing style is beautiful and you give so much life to all your characters! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Ahhh!
Wow.
Please continue. =D
This story is truly beautiful and I'm sooooo curious about what the heck is going on with her illness or whatever, and what's going to happen between Erica and Nathaniel.
Love, love, love. <3

I'm curious about her ailment. What makes her so different? So mysterious...

tnx to all of you :)
I'm really glad you like it :)

I absolutely love this story so far. I am just not sure if the word pissed was used in the17th century though. still adot thestory and the layout. i am dying to know what is going on with erica and what will go on with nathaniel. you have beautiful descriptions and i want more so i hope that you update soon! =)

I just love it! Go on, please!!

such a lovely update. More soon please! xx

Okay there were just a couple awkward sentences/grammatical errors but seriously I'd be such a hypocrite if I harped on that...

This story is so so amazing. I LOVE IT. Seriously, I want to know what's up with Erica, and I want to know NOW. And I want her to meet this Nathaniel person, and I want to know more about this Lord David guy and blah blah blah.

Anyway. YES.
This is so awesome!

ah I love this!
horses are my life so you incorporating that into an original story totally has me hooked :D

You are an amazing writer! I just subscribed.

Love the layout, as well; it's gorgeous.

I. Love. This. End of story.

Aaaah, that was a great start to what I know will be a brilliant story. I love the description you've put in to every paragraph, it's really, really good. I can't wait till the actual chapters to the story start 'cause I know they're going to be just as great as the prologue...great job! xx :) Update sooooon....

Right so, just subscribed cause I know this will be just as fab as the other story Blue Charmers. Can't wait for you to start. Great layout by the way, really nice. xx :)

Okay, I simply adore your layouts. Just looking at them makes me want to subscribe to your stories.