when I read your story I am excited because I want to know what happens next, when you write those nice moments like that of the ball room I feel tenderness and... I don't know... is that what you wanted to know or what else?
Oh, and I think you may be using the word "contempt" in the wrong context. Unless I'm misreading it. Contempt means to dislike, or have disgust with someone. I hope I don't offend you or anything for pointing this out.
Oh, he's leaving. How sad. :| The mystery just continues to grow. >< I hope he finds some answers, 'cause I'm really lost here. Hahah. And what's the deal with this William character..
I thank whoever Patty is for getting you to update so soon. :D I can not wait for the next one, and how Erica will take him leaving. And now that the seed that he could have feelings for her has been planted in his head, this ought to be good. :D Still wonderful, as always. (:
Oh geez man. Where to begin! Erica was bold to not care about the rules, and stay alone with him. And he was bold to question Cecile about things. The mystery just grows and grows. I can NOT wait until you update again. I wonder what Erica did to save Nathanial and why it caused her to be shut away for four days. Gah! The suspense...KILLS ME.
Keep it up dearie! (: I think I keep spelling his name wrong..
Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE LIVED! This is so pressure-izing, you have to update soon! Wow, this story's getting intense. Intense, dude. I am so freaking excited!!!!!!!! <3