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  • Dezi Demize

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    It's a bit of a bummer that this story never got finished
    September 22nd, 2018 at 07:30pm
  • SynxDeepxInxYour

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    LOVE!!!! Hope you finish soon!!!!!!!!! Mr. Green
    August 16th, 2012 at 11:32am
  • JudgeOnlyMyFuture

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    this was an actually good story to read i hope u update and finish this soon. i was just so amazed by the story line. keep up the good work =]
    January 8th, 2012 at 07:28am
  • sammie101119

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    <3 oh i love it!!!
    November 21st, 2011 at 03:27am
  • nathalii47

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    love to read more!!
    November 2nd, 2011 at 10:36pm
  • hello love.

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    i enjoyed this. it'll certainly be interesting to see where you'll go from here, so very many possibilites.
    i do think, however, that edward would show some concern for his wife, and that carlisle, at least, being the pacifist leader, would be horrified by kyra's actions, perhaps conflicted about her place in the group.
    but i very much liked the relationship exploration with Jane. you stayed true to the book character but gave her background insight, which added vital depth to her and gave more to kyra. please, update this soon!
    October 8th, 2011 at 11:01pm
  • Bigdreams91

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    please update soon. I love this story and would love to know what you plan for next. Update soon!!
    Very big twilight fan here.
    September 29th, 2011 at 12:06am
  • pyrobubblegum

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    Love your story cant wait till the next one comes out ^_^
    September 8th, 2011 at 08:13am
  • Error-00

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    incredible
    more soon please!
    August 6th, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • firecatfish

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    nice keep writing it's a good story
    August 6th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • cyn4675

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    wait so now there's a love triangle between edward kyra and paul WOW!
    August 6th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • a venom

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    loved the update
    can't wait for more
    August 6th, 2011 at 12:22am
  • shaylove

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    Uh ohhhhhhhhhh :) Well, I'm kinda glad Bella's gone. But WHAT ABOUT EDWARD? XD
    August 5th, 2011 at 03:55pm
  • JustThinking

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    imprint.. damn.. I can't say that I saw that one coming. but the one with the child, maybe a little. that bella would die, would never be surprise in this story, and if you are in need of a break, then take it. =) I'm not unsubscribing just because of that.
    August 5th, 2011 at 03:00pm
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    IMPRINT!
    Mwahahahahahahah!
    Loved it.
    I can't believe she turned a child.
    Of all the heatless bullshit she could have done.
    Damning that child to a life where she could be nothing but a blood thirsty monster is pretty low.
    She sickens me.
    I'm glad she's dead.
    I enjoyed this chapter.
    August 5th, 2011 at 10:00am
  • Mysticshadows

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    Loved your new chapter..hope u continue to write
    <3
    August 5th, 2011 at 09:05am
  • Mrs.Randy-Orton

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    i loved it please update soon
    August 5th, 2011 at 08:39am
  • forever_ends

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    this story is flipping amazing!!!! Pleassseee update soon!!!!
    August 5th, 2011 at 08:24am
  • lifes_life

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    Love the story!! Update Soon!!!
    August 5th, 2011 at 07:46am
  • Short Change Hero.

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    Ohhh, I love it!
    Please, update soon!
    August 5th, 2011 at 01:16am
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