I Love Bella being a bitch, but I think you should let Edward get more annoyed of it, and perhaps emmett or alice get in a big fight with her >:] And you should definitly get more sexualy about Alec and Kyra :]
It was awesome! Dont change one damn thing! I cant wait for more to come! Im super excited for the next chapter to see whats going down!! =D Update soon please?! XD