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Update again!!!! I liked the last chapter!!

Please follow the Writing Guidelines. You can find them in the forums.
You're supposed to type conversations separately like this:
"Hey," She smiled.
"Oh, hi." He said back.

Not all grumbled up, ya' know?
So I'm just giving you some criticism..
Anyways, keep up the updating (:

i just found my new obession. Please update soon!

loved the update and dam that dude really shouldn't have pissed her off
more soon?

That was amazing.
I'm glad things are better fOr you.
Can't wait to see what you do next.

I still love it
Please update soon

omg that was fuckin amazing! i just read your whole story and i never thought in my entire life i would love a twilight fan fiction because im so in love with the stories and edward and bella but this is fantastic! can't wait for the next update!!

YAY you updated i just kinda spazzed out a little this is one of the feww edward stories that i still read so i was pretty damn excitedd

Loveeee itttt. My names Kyra btw so its perfect.

Update please! (;

i loved it

loved the update
can't wait for more
sorry about your break up

Good story! :D

okay, AWSOME! I neeed more. I never saw this coming.

i really didn't see this coming
more soon?

please update

Oh geez whats she gonna do? hows she gonna screw up? the suspense is killing me.... update please!?!? :D

UPDATEEEEEE.

<3 <3

I think this is a really good story so update update!!!!! plz???

your story still rocks. now I can't help wondering what she's going to do. update please.