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wonder what she's going to do?
more soon?

no please update like nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow plesae

Woo! I luv it keep writing!!!

loved the update
can't wait to see for what she's going to show alice
more soon?

please update like now pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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can't wait to see what happens next
happy you got your laptop back

awsome story. normally I don't read Edward fanfics. but your's really good. the only way to make it even more perfect is longer chapters, kind of like the last one. please update soon.
btw love the entire bitch in diguise thing.

Update!?

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i think edward should kill bella on his own. awesome story you have here!

plzzzzzzzz write more<3

Love It!
Update Pronto Please?!

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gah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im so into it! nd i always thought bella was a whiny bitch

loved how edward finally admitted who he wants
more soon?

Short, but I'm interested in where you're taking this.

Great update. :)
I seriously cannot wait for more
I hope you update again soon.

i loved it plzzzzzzz update ASAP

This would be even better if you put in correct diologue.
As in, don't write the conversations all together like this:
"Blah blah," Said Alice. "Blah blah," I said back.

It should be like this:

"Blah." Said Alice.

"Blah," I said back.

But other than that I like your writing. Especially 'cause
it's an Edward love story. :D
Sorry if I'm pushy, I just like the story and don't wanna
risk the reported issue. D:

i'm really not into twilight or edward or the books/movies in general but this a really good story! I'm enjoying it a whole lot! I hope you update soon! :)

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Love this story! =D!