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  • DecodeMe16

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    Its seems interesting :D
    April 27th, 2010 at 11:22pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    interesting :)
    April 27th, 2010 at 10:06pm
  • Lon3lyangel

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    I love this new story. I honestly can't wait for the next one. :)
    April 27th, 2010 at 08:35pm
  • shattered heart.;;

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    Another amazing creation, tay! (:
    Already I can tell this is going to be as captivating and incredible as your other stories, I like the characters already, and I'm so excited to watch the plot unravel, and find out everything!
    Update soon! You have to write more!. (:
    April 27th, 2010 at 06:52pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    : D
    April 27th, 2010 at 01:09pm
  • Pufferfish8D

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    I likes it :)
    April 27th, 2010 at 12:21pm
  • hallgrl95

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    so...i'm guessing that cass is a cheat, maybe? i don't know...all i know is that you mentioned something about her sneaking around behind his back. this seems utterly amazing. update soon!
    April 27th, 2010 at 06:41am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    April 27th, 2010 at 06:05am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    April 27th, 2010 at 06:05am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    cant wait for more :]
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    April 27th, 2010 at 06:05am
  • yacht16

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    Sounds good it could really be a great story once theres more interaction between characters :)
    April 27th, 2010 at 05:54am
  • glitter on the floor

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    I feel bad for Jules because she's like the left out kid. Cass seems, very self absorbed and... drama queen-ish. I don't know what the deal with their dad is but I have a feeling he will play a very big part in this story. I also think that their divorce was a messy one and that's why her mom's so bitter. I loved the you described everyone, you gave each character a firm personality. I can't wait for more :]
    April 27th, 2010 at 05:48am
  • crookedsouls.

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    That was not boring at all!
    I loved it.
    And I love everything about this so far.
    And I kind of like how you're not telling us too much yet.
    Gives us more room to wonder.
    Haha.
    I can't wait for more.
    April 27th, 2010 at 05:42am
  • FlyWithMe;;

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    Cass already seems like someone I'm not going to like :P
    This was a great beginning :) So did not bore me at all :)
    Please continue with it! It looks really interesting :)
    April 27th, 2010 at 05:04am
  • fireinhereyes

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    WOW. I was hooked after reading just the summary. Looks to be another masterpiece on the way from you! Update soon? =]
    April 27th, 2010 at 04:48am
  • ayaak125

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    It seems like a really cool story idea! I hope you continue it!
    April 27th, 2010 at 04:37am
  • Imperfectly Perfect.

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    IF U DONT WRITE THIS...

    IMMA SHANK YOU.

    Kidding! But you betta write this!
    April 27th, 2010 at 02:57am
  • glitter on the floor

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    Ah, sounds really good haha.
    Love them all, can't wait for the first chapter.
    April 27th, 2010 at 02:42am
  • ttbubba101

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    Looks like another keeper! :)
    April 27th, 2010 at 02:12am
  • FlyWithMe;;

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    This look amazing. Just like all your other stories :)
    I don't think I'll ever read a story of yours and NOT like it haha
    April 27th, 2010 at 02:05am