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Paragraph six is really really great

I'm already thinking this could be another contender for favorite chapter and I'm only a few paragraphs in

Multiple comments because I can already tell I've got a lot to say
And doesn't a bigger amount of comments make you feel good?

And then Craig snorted at that last thought because, hello, symbolism.
win.

I haven't yet read the chapter but in the subtitle thing
I read EPICPORN as EPICORN
like possibly an epic unicorn
...I was wrong

YAY! Im so glad that he isnt a prick anymore! such a good thing!
AMAZING AS ALWAYS@ i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I USED THE WRONG YOUR. OH MY GOD I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE DO THAT.
Sorry.

your*

I'm so happy James is quitting! And I'm so happy you updated! It was worth the wait :)
I hope Craig and Will can be happier now they have less problems to deal with. You're writing is amazing, never stop <3

That chapter was well worth the wait. :]
I got sucked into it...and I felt like I was there. Like, I felt as though I was above it.
And, just to ask, when you used the phrase nth degree, was it meant to be ninth degree, by any chance? I just thought that that is the phrase...unless you are using something completely different.
But that's just me. I just notice stuff like that :]
And like always, it was amazing. Like I said at the beginning of the comment, it was well worth the wait (it was double worth the wait :])

Ugh ugh ugh. my email is fucking up, so know I'm not ignoring you, <3
But seriously, if you ever make me wait this long for an update again I'm going to slit your throat. :l (I kid, I kid. I love you too much for that c:)

Bahaha, but oh shit, YES.
I'm so glad James quit, seriously.
Now he can go home and be a real dad. (LMFAO, I accidentally typed 'go homo' ahahahahahahahahaha)
And Craig can have his parental support back, and Sophia can have her husband back.
And Will won't have to murder James for making poor little Craig cry. Seriously. Why would someone cross Will? I feel like he's a momma bear. Actually, I'm pretty certain he is. I think he'd tear anything apart that tried to hurt Craig in anyway. We all know he was thinking about destroying that kettle that burned Craig. Mhm.

God, I babbled again.

But yeah, shit. This was so great, because now James won't randomly get murdered by these mafia-esque crazies. And since his friends are nice and shallow, they'll be fine! :D They were great, by the way. Absolutely adorable. And I bet they'll be nice and rich when they're done with this. :DDDD

Shit, this comment is kind of suckish 'cos I have a headache (meh, excuses)
but, if you update this weekend, I'm going to shit my pants.
And march until I find you.
And smother you with love.

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morenaoplease.
ohandistillloveyou.

HAHAHAHAHAH, Vinny the Butcher, that's awesome. Okay had to get that out of the way. Punny. Now, this chapter was really good!
The description of him in his office and Janis was so cute! I like their relationship and how he stutters around an old lady.
But finally, FINALLY good for James for realizing what was important, I like the line: "All the petty lying, the bullshit, the ass-kissing, the caring what others think…it was all just so stupid. James had finally moved past it—realized that nothing should be before his family." Just put it so simply yet honestly. Very nice.
And his coworkers ahahahahahahahaha, asking that question at the same time. Awesome. And I love that they were Bluetoothing each other.
Your ability to write real dialogue is amazing, it doesn't seem fake at all, even with mobsters talking.
Major props }:D
But I did miss Craig and Will!

there is finally some sense in that man.

i'm not quite sure why but i think this is my favorite chapter
it's not even because there's a slight glimmer of hope
it's just something about the writing i think.
especially the second paragraph
and another somewhere in the middle.
i loved the whole thing
but this chapter
hnnn <3

Oh, man. This is so, so, so, so, so amazing. I just happened to be in my inbox, and the update was put up annnd then, I refreshed my inbox. That's a pointless anecdote, though.
But nah, I really liked how it just flowed together. Like it went from one scene to another like 'pow! pow! pow!' ...I think I've said that before though. But it's a thing I should come back to.

Awwwwwwww! I'm so glad Bert apologized, and it's great that James is finally being honest now! That phone call at the end with Will and Craig was the most adorable thing ever, I love Will. I can't wait for the next update :)

I very much enjoy this story! it was a wonderful, happy way to end off my crappy day, so thank you for allieviating my pain.

im just so in love with this chapter... berts coming to terms with it, james is coming clean! Its GREAT! love love love love love

Oh god, you can't even imagine how excited I was when I saw this was updated.
Like, I was like "what the fuck?" because I totally forgot about the fact that you hadn't updated yet (I fail, I'm sorry!) but just know I squee'd and went straight to read it :3

okay, you're right. this did make me squeal. (obviously, I already said that. haha)
Like, James had balls and it was like he was the James that I fell in love with in the first chapter before everything got all fucked up and then he all held Sophia's hand and I was like "AWWWWWW" and then Craig was all "Yes, everything is going to be okay." and THEN he was like "Me and Will are going to be like that. c:" and oh my god I nearly died. Just. fuck it was so cute.

Aw, shit, and then Craig went and burnt his hand..lmfao. Burns fucking suck. That probably goes without saying, but still. And just, fuck, it made everything like. Just broke the tension that was there and haha, yeah. fucking comedic relief. Ahahaha, I feel so bad when I laugh at that poor baby's expense. But I can't help it, he's just too cute. :3

Okay, and then shit, YES. Everything with Bert is all gravy.
I'm so happy that he can find it in himself to love Craig.
And to love his favorite son. ;)
I mean. Shit, I was just so happy it all turned out the way it did.
And that Bert actually took the news about Jonothan being gay really well.
He didn't go all "FUCKIN' FAGGOT!" like he kind of did with Craig. Haha.
And they both apologized and just <3333333333333

Oh god, and the end of this. Adorable.
Williams is such a little mother, it's adorable.
And the thing about him squawking made me laugh, btw.
They're going to be so cute when they get back together again.
Gah, I wished you could of just teleported him back to Craig's arms
so they could of just, bathed in the knowing that everything was going to be alright.
And then William could of kissed Craig's booboo's away and..whisked him off into the water and commenced with the buttsecksing ;D kidding, totally kidding.
But really, I can't wait until Will comes back. NEXT CHAPTER, YES?

I love this, I love you,
more soon. I DEMAND IT.

AWWWWWWW that handholding scene was just adorable! And it made it even cuter than he imagined him and William. Naw. And oh man, when James was telling Bert about jonathon, I teared up, that was just so....real, like the dialogue and the emotion. That's awesome that Bert will try to accept Craig now. And I love how you made Craig have a comic relief moment, and then made Will flail about it! That's funny because your last text said you were flailing-IRONY. BUT YEAH. Oh caps lock is still on. Awesome chapter.

Seeing this had updated made me really happy this morning and I've been waiting all day to read it. Amazing chapter once again, I miss Will though! He should come back and make Craig happy because they are the cutest couple ever. I'm glad James might actually be about to tell the truth now. I can't believe there isn't many chapter left though, this is my favourite story! I'm excited for the sequel though:)

Gihh! (exactly what I said...)
I can't imagine this ending. I really, really can't. But it's good that there might be a sequel.
I love how you can just take one thing, and stretch it out to a whole, long chapter.

Im always happy when you update because i know its going to be amazing! I have never, EVER been proved wrong! This Chapter is yet ANOTHER amazing chapter in this FANTASTIC story. Im Glad that Craig's dad is finally going to own up to something that he did. he's FINALLY going to tell them the truth... i hope. I hope that your AP exams go well.... and dont rush on the chapter! It will be worth the wait :D