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WHY ARE THEY SO CUTE TOGETHER?
The part in the car was adorable, and so was Will's family in general. I'm worried about Madison though, and the way you describe her is amazing. I don't even know what to say this story is just so perfect.

Okay... I'm going to go off randomly here for a second.....
Im going through the comments in this story, and i read the one at the top of this page, and i cracked up, because when i clicked on the link for this chapter, i glanced up and read the word above as (apparently other people have too) epiccorn..... and then i saw "Epic unicorns, UNITE!" and couldnt stop laughing....
then i scrolled down, and saw that i posted a swear word and an "almost" swear word, and i dont remember doing that....
heck, i dont even remember commenting... :/
oh well.

now that my random tangent is over....

You are amazing, and i can understand high school finals, so its okay that you were late. i think all of the readers are willing to wait for this story because it is worth it.

oh, and no matter how short the chapter is, whenever i see those little symbols that indicate that the chapter is over, i get really happy and smile because i loved and enjoyed the chapter.

and i really did. i thought this chapter was adorable, and cute, and lovely... and I'm sad that this is part one of the final chapter :'(

and congrats on GRADUATING THAT HELL HOLE! YOU'RE DONE!!!!! YAY FOR SUMMER BREAK!

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Okay, you were right, I squiggled. The part in the car, William is so adorable. I sat here with a stupid smile on my face.
And you are so wrong, the Madison thing was perfectly woven into the plot and didn't seem weird at all. So not a bad move. She's interesting as well.
The family dynamics you describe are really incredible, the detail was really awesome.
I also like that you split the final chapter. Hightens the suspense.

I was in Arlington. You were In Dallas.
FUCKING NOT FAIR. ): but, september. My Chem and Blink. <3
but, I'm so unbelievably happy you updated!
And it was really cute, even though I'm really worried about Madison now, since Will is :/
I really love how you have that ability to make me feel what your characters are feeling.
It makes them feel all the more real :)))

I love you! Please update soon I need the rest now <3

It's really funny because I yawned when I read the yawning thing.

I think I was subscribed to this at one point, and it somehow got deleted off my subscriptions page. Then I found it again today and I was like 'omfgyayimsofreakinghappy' and yeahhhh... Fun stuff.
Anywho, I love this story. I love the characters and the drama and the originality of it, and just... everything about this story is so amazing.
Annnnd, did I read something about a sequel in the AN? I think I did. (and I'm pretty sure I squealed like a little fan girl.) Heehee. XD
But yeah, I love this. Your writing is so amazing. Makes me happy. XD

hold mother-f-ing shit! Dirty dirty dirty!
but i loved every word of it <3
oh my god, you're amazing!
dont ever stop writing, or im going to cry!

AWWWWWW. I probably shouldn't have found that chapter cute, but I did. ahahahaa.
They are back together.
I wasn't aware that they were apart for so long...damn.
But I must say my favorite part was when Craig said Will smelled like Peanut butter and William. Twas very cute.
And the fact that Will wouldn't leave because he didn't want to miss Craig coming home, very freaking adorable.
Kind of ironic that you posted this chapter today though, ahahahahha.

Nicely done.

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GAH! That chapter and the author's note combined were such a mind-fuck. And I don't use the word mind-fuck all that often. But gah! Such an amazing chapter!
It's sad that this is almost over, and k'yeah, of course I'm interested in a sequel. Will and Craig are my favorite, well-developed characters. There's not often well-developed characters like these two. And well, most of the previous ones there have been, their stories have finished. But I think that Will and Craig and everybody else are the best well-developed characters.

Oh my goodness that was amazing. THEY'RE FINALLY BACK TOGETHER. I do not have much to say about this chapter because it was just basically porn, which was very hot and fantastic and just oh my god. The bit at the end was just adorable, it just kind of rounded off the hot sexy times that Will and Craig were having in a nice and cute way :)

The day this story ends will be a very bad day, it's just so good, no matter how long there is between chapters (which isn't even that long compared to most of the stories I read) it's just always worth the wait. So thank you very much for writing this story.

I was just randomly searching for something to read the other day and found this. I love it so much, seriously. This chapter was hot. Really hot. I love how you write :) <3

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happy Easter
or zombie Jesus day has you've called it

i most certainly could not find the innocence of the unicorn in this chapter
i also quite enjoyed the third from last paragraph

it annoys me to no end that i accidentally posted two

It's harder to count paragraphs when I've read more
So phrases will have to do
Like this one
Craig was pretty sure he might’ve died a little.

It's harder to count paragraphs when I've read more
So phrases will have to do
Like this one
Craig was pretty sure he might’ve died a little.

FUCKING PAGE CLAIM BITCH.

LMFAO ^^^ She read it as Epiccorn too.
Epic unicorns UNITE.

L M F A O
srs. I could of died I was so throughly amused with this.
And not even just the epic-ness of the boysecs, because still I'm laughing about that,
but like. God Will is so enthusiastic about everything he does and it's absolutely adorable.
See? I missed him a lot! D: Don't make him go away again. It isn't allowed.
And like, it was epic before they even got all excited about their boy parts
because Craig was like WILLWILLWILLWILL and then the symbolism line, lmfao, god this was so amazing.They are just simply the most adorable things on the face of the earth.

So really, I can't wait until the next chapter is up.
nor can I wait until you have the sequel all planned out and written and here!
Lord knows I will be harassing you for it. Because I want to see what all you have in store for these two. :)

Happy Easter, again!
May God have mercy on your soul.
ah-men.

Thirteen and seventeen are also great
(any line where enter was hit is considered a paragraph when counting)