My Calamity - Comments

I really like the style of writing :] and the story is really great :] I can't wait to read more.

hot Senior Jennifer Hood,
^ is senior supposed to be capitalized here?

That simple mistake and a few tiny seemingly run-on sentences are the only things I found wrong. (:

I really like this story so far. Your detail is super nice. C: <3
The layout is super organized and pretty, too.

I love your story! I wish I could write like you! I'm horrible! =P But I love your story!

ahhh i like this!
Awwwww he’s getting to know her! <3

Wow, this is really well written and now I'm really hooked!!
Great job!

I love this.
Simple, yet very emotionally provoking.
You portray your characters feelings very well.
Another chapter soon?

Yay! I've missed this story. (: I'm glad things are moving along now. The only things I have to correct you on are these:

When we pull up, Patrick and Jessica don't mask their astonishment. Jessica's mouth flops open, and she breathes a 'whoa'. You're using a different tense. This is present tense, and it doesn't go well with the rest of your story. Instead of pull it's pulled, instead of don't it's didn't, flops is flopped, breathes is breathed...you know.

Penelope waited for Patrick to answer. If he hadn't told his sister about the encounter with her, he obviously didn't want her to know. I think this was just an accident. You're not writing in third person, it shouldn't be Penelope waited for Patrick. It's supposed to be "I waited" because you're writing in first person.

(:

Uhmmm, what the hell? Why have I not read this startling piece of beauty earlier? I mean... like honestly this is the best story I have read in a freakin' long time - on the internet or otherwise.
It's funny how Patch totally has the same picture as one of my characters, we must share the same lust for the model in it lol.
I love this and really cannot wait for an update. You're an amazing writer xox

oh god he was gonna kiss her!
i cant wai till the next chapter! i wonder what you have in store for us! ;D

Great chapter:)

I still really enjoy this story. I need to catch up like majorly.
Hey, where do you get your story dividers? They're adorable.

this is amazing! i love it, please update asap!

hey, just letting you know, you posted chapter 7 two times. and i really enjoy this story. :)

So I was reading this on my phone and usually I just read them and subscribe but yours was to amamazing not to compliment. Amazing writing style!

So I was reading this on my phone and usually I just read them and subscribe but yours was to amamazing not to compliment. Amazing writing style!

Haha Patch was too preoccupied watching for Penn to leave he didn't even notice she was in his car. And my guess is that she's bleeding all over the place cause she cut herself on the glass but I'm probably wrong haha. Cute updates.(:

I love those last two chapters you posted, I just got to read them. Oh, Patch is so cute, smitten and all. :D I'm so excited for the wedding...you have no idea. I was wishing that Patch would get out of his car and approach Penn! Haha :D

Hahah, this story gets cuter every time I read the next update. :D
[Plusss, I like how you add the new band aids; it's refreshing]
Keep up the good work! [;

Three words: I love it :)

Gosh I just simply adore this.
Very nice update dear (: