woot two updates in one day! xD awww i always love Patrick's chapter! i can’t wait till you come back next week! I honestly love this story! it makes me smile like a dummy! ;D
I liked this chapter too! Ohh, I'm superexcited to see what will happen at the wedding. Patrick is so hilarious, he's practically a stalker...I can relate to his stalkerisms. I guess it's true when they say it takes one to know one ;D That 'whatever' thing make so much sense. I'll be waiting for the next update!
Oh my god. This is amazing, already. I love the endings on chapters two and three, seriously. I love the cute little way she blushes when he takes his shirt off, how he thinks it's so adorable...everything just flowed so perfectly in this...consider me your latest subscriber. Seriously.
on the side walk caught my attention and I looked out over the banister of the porch and that's when I first laid eyes on her. This was the only thing that could be changed, that really caught my eye. Too many 'ands.' Otherwise...I'm so in love.
Oh, Penn is smitten! It's so cute! Patrick seems like the type of guy I'd want to keep around :D So now that they have officially met I'm excited to see what's going to happen next. I'm placing my bets on Patrick making the first move. : )
widely :)
gosh, i adore this story, your writing is absolutely amazing :)