Life on Mars - Comments

I saw that you updated and got really excited.

I don't know if I've said this before but I love how there's no drama for the sake of having drama. It's realistic and it makes sense. I've probably said it before and I probably sound like a broken record but every time you update that's one of the first things I think.

We're getting bombarded with snow too. I personally love it but I do think the storms should spread out a bit. I have midterms that need to get done. It's actually snowing right now.

Love this story!!

I adore this update.
I literally am in love with this story. The way you write is fucking astonishing, I can't quite get my head around it. You should get published, for Christs' sakes.

I understand hectic schedules. That's all I am this year, one big hectic schedule. I hope you had a nice Thanksgiving. I pretty much passed out after eating, I was so tired.

Like Novocaine said above, it's about damn time they kissed. I knew it would happen eventually, I just got impatient waiting for the eventually. lol

So super happy that you updated!!! I totally understand the hectic schedule thing. I look forward to your next update!

Oh man, I can die happy now!! I effing love it! About time they kissed! Fark! o.o please don't make me wait that long again!!

Please??? Update... : D

Please update!!!

Please update!!! I miss your updates!!!

I absolutely adore this story. You're a really great writer. your writing sounds very smooth and eloquent. :]

OMG! I love it!

Ugh, amazing, of course.
I liked the whole "cooking with Tomo" bit. It was cute, how you described them playing around.
This hesitance and semi-awkwardness between Eliza and Jared at the moment kind of scares me xD
can't wait to see this minor drama unfold ;]

Drama drama drama. I'm kinda of (really) excited. I get antsy when I know drama is gonna come. Funny how I was just saying that there seemed to be very little bits of drama (it's there but not huge drama) and now I'm all antsy 'cause I know there's gonna be drama and I can't wait. Haha.

Happy Halloween!

Loveddd this big time! Update very soon, I get so excited whenever I see that this is updated!
No problem for the schooling, haha :)

Wonderful update! Poor Jared at the end, hopefully the upcoming drama won't be too heartbreaking

Not enough Jared! But still an excellent update regardless!!

I love your story...
The way you describe the character's personality is amazing.
I also think that you are doing a great job with the writing because the chapters are big and I think that's important that a story doesn't have the same person's POV...
So... I hope that the updates will be fast and i am waiting for big chapters!!!
You're doing an amazing and fantastic job...
: D

Everyone above has already said what I wanted to say. I guess that's what I get for being away all day yesterday, right? Haha.

Great chapter. I just noticed how little drama there is. Like, there's drama but it's all real drama that happens/can to real people. Not over the top drama that many think is what makes a story. I don't know if I've already said that but I'm too lazy to go back and check what I've said and what I haven't.

I know i've told you this before, but DAMN I love this story.
Your writing is phenomenal.
And I really liked this line in the last chapter: "I wanted all of her. I just wanted everything else first."
I'm not really sure why, I just took a liking to it. Makes Jared seem deep, in a way.

I feel like your teasing me. You do these EXCELENT updates and then I have to wait for more. I effing love this story.