Life on Mars - Comments

Oh my GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is bloody fabulous! I'm SO into this story, and I love the longer chapters.
I'm excited for an update!
xoxo

Oh my GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is bloody fabulous! I'm SO into this story, and I love the longer chapters.
I'm excited for an update!
xoxo

I like it a lot. The style of writing is really good too :) Can't wait to read more.

I'm not very good at commenting on stories because I never really know what to say. Most of the time I just end up repeating myself, which I don't like.

You have a good hold on your characters, which I really like. Some authors have a problem with keeping their characters separate and they end up all the same. Even if it is very early in the story I can tell which character is which, I can picture the characters in my head and they're all different and I love it.

This part just made me even more interested in reading what happens next.

ditto^^ its nice to see someone who seems to have fully thought out their characters too x

Very long first part and I like it. It gives me a chance to really see the way you write. It wasn't too long either, it didn't bore me halfway through.

I like the way you write. You describe but you don't describe too much and you don't use really long words that make it sound like you used nothing but a thesaurus. I like that in writing.

Don't know what else to say really. I like this story so far and I can't wait for the next part.