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Chapter 25: It's true what they say, love makes you blind. I personally think it's great that Elena wants the SuperHero program, but I think she needs it to bring Hero down. After what he did to her, he deserves to get his ass kicked. He really is now the enemy!

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Oh. My. Freaking. GOSH.

I was like, two chapters behind. I found it unnerving but oddly touching when she was considering suicide by jumping off the building, then you had her turn to the black skyscraper and remember her compatibility with the SuperHero tech...at first I was like, "No way, she isn't---" then I realized that I might have kind of sort of been an accomplice to that idea like, months ago and laughed and then wondered if Elena really is going crazy.

She's definitely in denail about Hero, though. He's kind of psycho right now. And creepy. And...yeah. Just...yeah.

I love this story so freaking much and I can't wait to see whether Elena goes through with her crazy scheme or not.

I'm addicted. :)

Only 7 chapters left? Cries. :'(
I can't believe that after everything that happened Elena is still doing things for him.
Please update soon.
^_^
♥♥♥

I am so... flabbergasted (lol, funny word c:) on why the hell Elena is doing this for Hero right now. I'm thinking it's maybe because she's already relied on him for a while and she's "blinded by love" or something ;x. Either way, it just seems like her and Hero are little messed up in the head at the moment o_o. But, knowing this story is written by you, it probably has some supercalifragilisticexpealidocious meaning behind it that I won't understand until you reveal it x).

& wow, only 7 chapters left? I can't believe we're at this point of the story already ;o.

IT'S SUPER INTENSE!!

SHE CANNOT GO BACK TO HIM. I WILL DISOWN YOU.

Just kidding iloveyoupleaseupdatewhenyouhavetime.

ok is it just me or has Ellie lost it??? Cos i thought you said hero was the one with issues!!!

but then again it could just be me misinterpreting

Update again when you can!!!

Chapter 23: Okay, now I'm really scared for Ellie. What has Hero done to her? I never thought that she would be the one to snap! O_o

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Only seven chapters left?? Gosh. That seems so sudden.
I love this story so much.
And I feel so bad for Elena. I suppose I can understand her thought process in her devastation, but I still feel sorry for her.
I guess she doesn't quite see Hero's mask yet, does she?
Can't wait for the next chapter.

More than being confused by Hero in general, I'm still kind of confused as to why Elena attached herself so quickly and easily to him.
She seemed to strong and now she seems so dependent on him. Eh...I don't get it.

Been reading this for the past few days and all I can say is god damn.
This is so great, truly. The way you write is entertaining and makes me feel like I'm watching a movie instead of reading a story.
And I love the concept of a superhero with a few issues. Quite compelling stuff. Makes him unpredictable.
I just knew there was something not quite right about Hero. It's not something I was able to put my finger on while I was reading, but there were times when he said or did something that made me uneasy.
Anyway, I can't wait to find out what happens next with Elena. Kinda sucks that her saviour isn't who she expected him to be.
Love the website, btw. I've had Skillet stuck in my head all day. :)

........... I just started reading this story yesterday, and up until Chapter 22 it was amazing. Then, Hero turned into a complete jack ass. Now I'm upset. But it is still awesome. I just hope that Damon somehow made Hero act like that, or Hero is acting like that just to keep Elena safe. Either way, I hope you update soon! Definitely got my subscription.

OH NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

WHAT THE F*** IS HIS PROBLEM!!!!!

*clears throat* sorry! I just hate bitchy guys especially when they act like THAT!

update when you can!!

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The worst part is I was waiting for this to happen, and I kept telling myself that I was prepared for it...
I wasn't. :/
It doesn't matter though, nothing in this story could disappoint me, well except for not updating that is.
^.^
But Elena is too strong for this BS, she is going to come back, and she is going to come back swinging... HARD.

What a bitch!
That poor girl. :/
Things just aren't going right for her ....

I don't like Hero anymore. He's an arse. ^_^ That is all
Although... it would be awesome if you updated soonly though :3

Chapter 22: THAT SON OF A BITCH!!! How could he fucking do that to her? Maybe Hero is the enemy after all....If he didn't have super powers, I'd kill him myself!! >.<

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Huh....
Not surprised. :\

So...I take this is where the whole rushing into love comes into play?

I just read a few of the comment above, and yes, if this was Hero's plot all along, she better get the new version in her and come back to beat his ass.