Rebirth - Comments

Aphrodite better be careful... you can't mess with affairs of the heart easily without someone getting hurt. Update soon please xx

HOW? HOW DO YOU DO THIS!? Just when I thought I couldn't love your writing any more, you pop out this piece of perfection and I'm left sitting here like...like...AWED. I'm pretty sure this is the best chapter yet, and all because of the way that you write Olympus and the Gods. I love Artemis! I love them all actually, but Aphrodite better keep herself in check, lemme tell you! PLEASE UPDATE SOON <333

lmfao, as much as I'm all for a gang of crude, inked and pierced bad boys, i must say that i'd have to go with apollo on this one. love how you illustrated the power in his eyes despite his calm and relaxed demeanor. ;)
i would love to see how these dinner plans go. and the dad...what's up with him? can't wait to see the story behind the father-daughter relationship.
MORE, MORE, MORE!! :D

I'm reading an update sober! Woo!
Apollo cracks me up in this story, he really does.
He's so possessive though!

I MADE A CAMEO IN YOUR STORY? FUCK. YES.

Also, I feel I may rival Zero. I do loveee this story! :F Can't wait for more! <222

AN UPDATE! OHMYGOSH<3
Shall I tell you how much I love this story? Benedict Cumberblahblah is hosting a show on TV and I've stopped watching it because I couldn't wait to read this :D

Each was decorated in a plethora of different designs; their arms and chests covered
- This line is lovely even though I dislike those naughty Miller boys! I think it's your use of the word plethora. I'm making it my word of the week :)

His blood began to boil at the thought of these boys, nowhere near men, nearly molested his love with their eyes. The temperature dropped a few degrees as Apollo’s fingers tightened into fists.
Apollo's getting angry! And they do not want to make him angry!

The sole mention of her father was able to stir a flame within her. They never respected her family.
They're all a bag of dicks!

Also, I think one of the main things I love about this story are the little details most writers don't bother with. Like how the dialect of the Miller boys is more broad and blunt than that of Sian and Apollo.

“He arrived here a few weeks ago. Apollo has been helping around town; at the library and at Mr. Fisher’s mostly. Quite the set of hands on him,” Sian broke in with a smile. Her eyes lingered over the bronzing taut skin and dark curls that intensified Apollo’s beauty.
Yeah he helps out around town! He came, he saw, he conquered. Now just give me a minute while I drool over Apollo...

“Your vehicles seem to be on fire,” Apollo said casually. His eyes were closed and a knowing smile quirked the smallest parts of his mouth.
He actually did...he set their wheels on fire. This is the greatest thing. I love him even more. Damn. And he did it with so little effort!

THEY'RE GOING ON A DATE. A DATE! SIAN AGREED TO A DATE.
-breathes- Oh this is just tremendously exciting. I'm bouncing about like a loser. I wonder if they'll bump in to a certain Captain and Trickster ;)

BAH! AND I DO LOVE THIS STORY MORE THAN ANYONE ELSE. I BELIEVE THAT WITH ALL MY HEART! AND YOUR WRITING IS BEAUTIFUL! IT IS EPIC. IT IS EQUIVALENT OF CAVILL'S BUM. OR HIDDLES SPEAKING GREEK. OR RENNER'S POSES.
- I won't even apologize for all the Caps.

This was awesome. I was totally expecting some kind of epic fight between Apollo and those dumb boys. Or you know. For him to have a shrub annihilate them. But setting their 'vehicles' (the way I imagine him saying that word = hilarity in itself) on fire was perfect. Absolutely perfect. I am surprised that Sian noticed the change in weather with Apollo's anger, not that she'd put them together. BUT THEY HAVE A DATE! A HOT DATE! AND HE WILL WOO HIS FAIR CASSANDRA! Oh my God. The perfectness of this man. I can't even. UPDATE SOON OKAY.

Raychel...I LOOF DIS STORY. Yes, I needed to type it that way. I cannot wait for an update. Homg. Love it. So much. Homg. That's really all I can say for now. You already know my feeling about your writing. <2222222

I cry a little bit inside every time I see you've update this. That's how happy it makes me. TEARS OF JOY!

“Gods, you have nice legs,” Apollo groaned as Sian walked past him in a pair of jean shorts and a patterned pink and white bikini top.
- This is possibly thee best chapter opening I've ever read ;)

“How am I asking too much when I barely ask at all?” Apollo was going along with this little game his Sian was playing.
I love this line. They may be playing a little game between them, but it appeared as though it were an innocent question.

“Oh, a bad boy,” Sian joked peering over the tops of her sunglasses at Apollo. “What is it that you’re doing to go against your father? Are you getting tattoos, have any secret piercings?”
Ha! because she totally thinks his Dad is just one of those 'normal' strict Dads, When he's like, the Don of everything! lol.

his eyes zeroed in on the tiny silver studs in the shape of helmets piercing her lobes. Apollo held back a hiss and jerked his hand away. The Helm of Hades, mark of evil.
Who ever knew earrings could be such a dangerous sign? See, that's how good you are, putting major points in even the smallest details.

”You tell her my name and I will snap your neck. Father would love to hear your explanation as to why you physically died on Earth,” Artemis growled in his head.
I LOVE ARTEMIS! she's so badass :)

But Sian could not put a finger on the beautiful man riding a chariot into battle, a golden shield baring a sun at his side.
HE'S SITTING NEXT TO YOU! AND YOU WANT TO JUMP HIS BONES!
...sorry, got a bit carried away there.

The image of Charon will forver stay with me!

“I do not know what you are doing, Hades, but you will not be victorious.” She turned and walked away briskly.
See, Artemis totally badass<3

HADES IS A BAG OF DICKS! :) -only your line could sum him up!
but what is he up to?? I'm so intrigued. I must know!

Also, I don't know if I've said this before, but I love the dialogue. Everyone -mortals and Gods- speak properly and it really makes me happy. Just...I JUST LOVE THIS STORY! <3

I adore it when you update. It really brightens my day XD
A lot of people can't hit realism with these sorts of story lines but you've made it work SO brilliantly that I quite literally wait for more after every post.
<3 Hope to see more from you soon

Ooooh. I love this story so much. You've made Apollo a total sex pot.

I love this story.

GAH, i can't get enough of this story. i really can't. i love love love how you've written it; it gives absolutely nothing away and always has me craving more.

so what is it that hades wants with sian? and the coincidence of sian wearing hades' mark is kind of weird. whats that about?

and then there's motherfucking apollo. damn, do i love him. schmexy, he is. mmhmm. sian won't be able to hold out for long, i just know it.

super excited to see what happens next. ;)

“Gods, you have nice legs,” like...perfect opening. For real. It made me giggle.

I love the banter between Apollo and Sian. I really do. It's so adorable and funny and realistic and everything in between. I can't wait for her to give in to him. Really can't.

HADES! YOU SCUMBUCKET! I want to know what he's up to!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!! <333

I can't wait for moreee! I know I always you this, but that's because it's always true. I love this story. I love your writing. It's all fantastic! :D <222

This is a really good story, and I hope you update it again soon! Like maybe...tomorrow? =D

I went to get my phone before I went to bed & I had an email! pojfodsjfodsjgkldsjgkhdsklghnkljrhgjklrengjnkag - yeah that's me dying when I saw it was from Mibba telling me this story had been updated.

“Young Apollo named ‘er Kalos. Means beautiful in Greek or somethin’ like that. He’s been lookin’ after ‘er since she’s been born. Real helpful that boy is.”
The name Kalos <3
and Apollo is God, yet he still has time to raise baby animals? My heart can't take this, why is he so perfect?

Sian blinked away from the pronounced muscles that corded his limbs. “Kalos and I have been waiting for you to visit. I’ve been telling her how pretty you are.”

He wanted her to look at him, have her undivided attention, undying love. He craved it.
AND SHE SHOULD!

No, seriously now, everytime I read this (that's a lot btw) I'm just in awe. It's simply stunning. You don't use redundant words when you're describing things and even when I'm reading about Apollo's blatant want for Sian (or vice versa), it's not corny or cheesy. It's just true :)

...BUT WHAT DOES HADES WANT??

& I adore Artemis. She's such a protective and caring sister <3

p.s; No, YOU ARE AMAZING. AMAZING I TELL THEE!

I adore Mr. Fisher! He's so sweet. And Sian and Apollo...the chemistry! I can not wait for the next chapter <3

I flipping love this story. <333
So amazingly written, as always.
Makes me want a piece of Apollo, too.
More? :)

WHY DID I NOT GET AN EMAIL?
well I did, but not on my phone so I only just found out this had been updated! stupid crap phone!

Damn, you can write :)
Apollo makes me drool, just...the way you write him...he's moved up on my God list, he's now number 2 haha. I think it's because he's so determined, and quite a bit sneaky (getting dreams planted and such). But then Sian is such a great character too! Damn her resistance.

I better not be waiting so long for the next update ;)