Rebirth - Comments

“You stare at me any longer and you’ll start to dream about me.”

I flat out giggled at that line. Oh boy do I have a crush on that man. Please update soon! <3

I loved it ^^ I'll be looking forward to the next chapter

Awesome.

Raychel, why you no post more Apollo faster? I LOVE THIS STORY AND YOU KNOW THAT. Anyway, can't wait for another update. I also can't wait for Sian and Apollo to finally hookup. <222

<3 this is beyond brilliant and I can't wait for more :D

Just realized that I'm a terrible commenter and forgot to do so. All I really wanna say is: I loved it! Per usual. I can't wait for more. I'm so in love with your greek mythology stories. <222

YAY! I really loved this chapter, mmhmm.
It's good to see that Sian doesn't give right in to Apollo's charm, even if all her fighting is in vain.
The flocks of women stalking poor Apollo is a hilarious image in my mind for some reason. I'm a little too creative when I read things and picture them in my mind lol.
And then I wanna know what the fuck Hades is up to with the creepy dreams. Why is Sian having so many, and how are they gonna get worse? Hmm....
So I think you should update this again soon. For I am very excited to read more. :)

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:) you just don't understand how much I love this. Like my heart actually does a dance ha.
I'm proud of Sian for resisting Apollo to be perfectly honest. Especially when every other woman has turned into a quivering mess. See I adore Sian aswell, and I don't usually love the female characters. They can be really pathetic I guess. But she's strong & stubborn and independant :)

HERMES!!!
XD

Hermes is so snarky. I love it!

Love this honey.

Just as amazing as the last chapter. Love it <333

Raychel. Srsly, LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY. I especially love when you suddenly use the word tool. It contrasts with the rest of the language in the story, so that made me laugh. Fantastic. Cannot wait for more! <222

I guess 'eloquently' is one way to put it haha.
Do you know how happy I was to get an email about this?? I don't even care if it's reposted.
ahh Aphrodite she may be beautiful, but her jealousy is very ugly.

Apollo makes me drool a little lol.

YAAAAAYYYY!!!!
i've waited sooooo so long for this and now i'm satisfied.
can't wait for the next update...which will be soon, i'm sure. ;)

An update?! WOOHOO! I was so happy when I saw this in my notifications. And it was amazing! <3

Totally not the update I was expecting!
I loved it though. And ugh, Aphrodite. I don't like her, and I don't just mean the character in your story. Definitely not a goddess that I am very fond of. Never really knew why, but I've never liked her.
Anyway! Off topic.
I loved the update! Yes I did!

where can I propose love for this story?
-oh, right here? ok then.

well i do, so much. And if this ever disappears again i'll actually come and find you.
Or I'll send Hermes to find you, but either way!
:)

J'adore! I love this story! Eek! Can't wait for more! :D <222

Wow. I'm so in love with this.
The way you've written everything is fucking brilliant. GAHHH, I can't wait to see what happens next!
And Apollo in a tight white shirt and jeans? *drool* Yeah...make sure to update this soon!
:D

Love this honey.