Rebirth - Comments

When I found this story had vanished, well, I'm not going to lie, I actually died a little inside.
I love the story and the way you tell it oh so much.

I'm more then ecstatic that it's back!

I FUCKING LOVE THIS!!! AHHH!!!
This is going to be a very sexyful story, I can already tell.
Can't wait for the next update.
Maybe you should make it your priority to update this for December 19, si? :D

This is awesome!!

Huzzahhhhhh! I cannot wait to read more! I love how dark the intro was! Fantastic! You're writing always keeps me engaged! <222

I absolutely adore the flirtation between Apollo & Sian.
& how you cleverly added that little bit where Sian looks at the drawing in the book she's reading & recognizes (but can't place) Apollo! - at least I pressume it's Apollo.

& seriously, on the edge of my seat with this whole Hades thing.

oh & i believe I forgot to mention that I also love your Artemis :)

I LOVED IT!!! Yup, yup I did = )
I seriously can't wait to see where this story goes!! I want to know what that pest Hades wants!! x

I love pie.
And I love this story. :)

I love this story!! I can't wait to see what Hades wants with her and I espicially can't wait to see Apollo's chase:D

RAYCHEL! I LOVE THIS STORY LIKE A FAT KID LOVES CAKE.

I mean, this story is excellent! That chapter was fantastic. I can't wait to find out what Hades has up his sleeve. And I love the tension between Sian and Apollo, per usual! As always...I love, love, love the way you write--the details, the description, everything! Fantastical!

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Wow.. I really LOVE this story.
please update soon. XD

Finally caught up!! i'm making sure to subscribe this time because it hurts to miss these updates.
Your description is delicious, I'm still drooling a little over Apollo ;)

& also, you have to update ASAP because I want to know the deal with Hades.

Wow, love.
I loved the update. It is so amazing!
I love this story so much!
So well written!
Definitely your best... in my opinion. xD <44

I loved it dear.
It makes me smile that Artemis is so protective of Apollo. It's sweet.
I'm a bit curious about what Hades is up to too.

AWESOME!! As always!! I swear, this story just gets better with each chapter = )
Can't wait for more ducky!! x

Sooooo, I'm just dazzled by your writing skillzzz. I love themmm. I really just wanna tell you to hurry up and write more, but I know how busy you are. I loveddd the updateee! I really can't wait for more, but I'll keep my excitement in check while I wait! :D

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Oh my. And I thought I had some racy dreams!! Tee hee.
I loved it ducky!! Awesome update as always.
This story always has me guessing = ) x

RAYCHEL LILLIAN
THAT COULDN'T HAVE BEEN ANY BETTER
I WANT MORE
NOW
That is all. :)

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Somehow I always manage to forget how much I enjoy this story between updates. I'm really not sure how, as it shouldn't happen. Probably because you update this sucker sparingly.
And what a steamy dream THAT was! Goodness gracious woman!
Loved it. :)

Sian is very strong for resisting Apollo as he's pretty delicious :)
I loveeee the dialogue, you actually think about what people are saying - which i've come to view as a rare quality lately on mibba.
Also, you mentioned Hermes! he's been my favourite God since I was wee high, well alongside Athena.

p.s; have i mentioned yet that this is my favourite story? Gosh, it's incredible.

"...a debonair dream..." My OH my! LOVE THE UPDATE! And no, Raychel, we'll never give up on you! <3