Rebirth - Comments

Whoop!! Loved the update ducky!!
This story intrigues me thoroughly!! I can't wait to see what happens = )
More...more...MORE =D x

oh and p.s. can you update Renegade soon please?? Whenever you have the time *flutterseyelashes* = )

Psh! Like I could ever give up on you!
Anywho, love, love, love ittt! The dialogue was hilarious in this chapter! Sian's sooooo hard to get.
Can't wait for another update! :F

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Soooo Apollo's protectiveness is kind of hot.
And I'm pretty sure Maria cracked me up.
I just love this story, all around. :)

I sincerely do love the update! It was amazinggg!
And yes, you do need to update more often! :D

Love it hunn!
Can't wait for more!
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Love this. Cant wait for more

Ahahah. I loved the update <33 :D

I finally got to read the update!!! Loved. It. 'Nough said. :)

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You have no idea how much I adore this. honestly. i think it should be a real bloody book!

is Aphrodite super pissed that Apollo thinks someone else is more beautiful? i think so.

I have one word for this Apollo fellow...DENIED!! Tee hee.
I loved it ducky and I can't wait for more = ) x

LOVE THE UPDATE!!
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I definitely love this story.
It is soooo good! I just can't comprehend the amazingness of this story.
I honestly can't wait for another update. :D
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Loved the update dear. The story is getting good, I can't wait for more. :)

omg, i'm so glad i came across this. :D i'm writing a mordern greek story,
and apollo is a douchebag in it and hades is the good guy. lol.
i love how yours is the total opposite. haha. :)

oh please keep writing, it'll give me ideas too. :)

I love this :)
It's so sweet how Apollo is in love with her and has been for so long
And how it actually hurts him to think of her

So yeah, I definitely love this story.
It's so amazing and beautifully written!
It's just... amazing. <4

I absolutely adore the premises of this story! I have always loved Greek mythology, and right from the beginning, I could tell that I was going to love this. The layout is nice and tasteful; simple, but elegant. I already like Sian, she's such a lovely heroine. She seems very dreamy, almost. I love how the gods interact; Apollo and Artemis are rather amusing together.

I caught a few grammar errors here and there. A few of your sentences almost felt like run-ons at times, but it's nothing a beta couldn't fix. You have created some fascinating characters, and I'm excited to see where you go with this. Bravo!

I want a pegasus!

also, is it wrong that i kinda like Hades? i was going to say something about Zeus now but i won't, for fear he will hear me. ha.

but anyway, this is really awesome. i'm so happy you're writing it :)

I loved it ducky = ) Can't wait for more!! x

I loved this update!
Kind of recognized the second half. lol.
I can't wait for more dear. :)

What is he doing?! I have s strange feeling this won't end too well, lol.
But I want mooore, so update sooon <33