The Illusion of Separation - Comments

FINISH THIS STORY MOTHERFUCKER

Dear Jesus Alleluia! You finally updated! WOOP WOOP! I loved it! Oh and random thing I wanted to share: there is a kid at my school who looks EXCACTLY like Christofer Drew, minus the tattoos, hippie clothes, and peircings. Mostly just the general face and beautiful hair :)

Okay I'm going to be completely honest, I have no idea who Christofer Drew is but that doesn't matter because your story is great! I've only read the first couple of chapters so far but I've already been sucked in. I love the relationship they have. It seems real and sweet to me. I'm definitely going to keep reading so I can see what happens. I'm just worried about who is going to die. I hope it doesn't make me cry! Anyways, keep up the great work; I really love your story!

This story is perfect! I hope you update soon. I'm so addicted to this story! I read it so fast. It's lovely! :)

So I know it flies in the face of everything logical and holy, but I really want Chris to 'live' and stay solid, you know? You've written his character so perfectly, and Hannah's is so good too that I just can't imagine them not makin it.
Anyway, great update(s)! I've been traveling out of internet range, so I just got caught up on the newest three- I'm really excited to see more. I like where you're going so far, and I'm impressed that you managed to write a non-boring, non-drama filled roadtrip scene.

I've cried so many times cause of this story.The plot is completely different and interesting.Please update soon I love this story!

Honestly.. please update?/

I love this story quite possibly too much.
Please update :)

Jgftfdwfjhd, I must have dreamt about commenting this or something because i swear subconsciously I felt like I had. Ugh. Anyway, you know I love your writing, and your stories, and pretty much every single one of your updates. Chris was again cute, jfhdek gah. Just waiting to find out what Carters got hiding up his sleeve. Update when you can! (: x

Thank you for updating you beautiful drop dead gorgeous author for all I know could be a boy. I loved it. I wonder if you could like make him visible and and let him become famous.

I just really love this ok. <3

love the update :D

Chris is so cute. Oh my god he is adorable. Beyond. Adorable.

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Christofer crossed his arms and pouted. I turned around in my seat and watched him for a few seconds, just taking him in. He truly was adorable and I was so glad that he hadn't disappeared from my life forever. He was a sunshine ray and if that ray had been blacked out I wouldn't know what to do with myself. I'd tasted just a little bit of that before he had started speaking to me and I had discovered that he hadn't completed the whole death process.

"Hey, Chris."

He didn't answer - just looked out the window with the pout on his face.

"Christofer, I love you."

He tried to remain silent, but the corner of his mouth lifted up in a smile. "I love you, too, Hannah," he said quietly.

Gah. I love you.

I really really love it.
Please update as soon as possible.

You have an impeccable way with words.
It's hard not to get lost in your writing

Yay! More frequent!!
Great great great chapter. I don't know why but I feel like something bad is going to happen..
Thank you for the update!

Awwwww, I liked this.
So so so happy you finally updated. ;3

YEAY! :D
more update? :]

love the update :D

UPDATE!! NOW!! Or else I won't leave you alone!

I cried when he died. And squealed when he became a ghost. And laughed a lot. You're a really great writer and I love this story!