How Willow Died - Comments

I love how you started the story with a newspaper article. It was a great devise. It actually made me a little scared. I want to read more of what you have to write. You have no grammar errors. Please write more.

The summary literally gave me chills, wow. It was so short, plain almost, but those two lines were bone-chilling almost. Something about them was magnificent.

I was a tad thrown off by the newspaper article in the first chapter. I really didn't expect something like that, nor have I ever even seen something like that in a story on Mibba. It was new for me. But something about it was great, and made me absolutely adore it.

The second chapter was so great. I hate that it was so short because I wanted more. Your writing flow is almost flawless. And I would hate to repeat myself over and over, but I literally am in awe of this story. I don't have a single bad thing to say about it. It's beautifully done and fantastic.

I can't wait to read more of this.

The layout for this story is beautiful. I love how plain and straight forward the summary is too! It may just be two lines but those two lines made me want to read this story.

I really love how the first chapter is actually an article in a newspaper. Brilliant.

The second chapter is short but to the point. It's great and I know I'm just repeating myself now but I love this. It's brilliant and your writing is just amazing. Incredible even.

I can't way for future chapters!

I don't have time to read this right now, I just saw it on someones rec list, and omg, the small summary made me rape the subscribe button so I can come back to it when I have time. I can't wait until I have time to read it. :')

The newspaper-style prelude grabbed me right away. Can't wait for the rest of it!! <3

Wow. What a chilling summary. Definitely captures your attention....

Lovely layout too.

I would have liked the newspaper to be a bit bigger, or the font of the article anyway. I struggled a bit to read it. I think that you said "residents" instead of "residence" in it. Otherwise, nothing else to comment on except it's interesting.

The fact that you used a newspaper like that to introduce the story is just great. Never seen it before and I definitely like it. Very unique.

A bit hard to judge, since nothing else has been posted, but so far good job :)

i like it so far. it's different than anything i've ever read and i quite enjoy it. (:

This story has "SWAG" written all over it.
Subbing.

oh wow, this seems likes its going to be very different.
I love the newspaper idea its very original.
I can't wait to see where you take this.(:

I've been waiting for this to start forever! :) I like the newspaper thing. Very interesting and fresh. Never seen that done on here - or anywhere else for that matter - before. Good job :)

Oh my gosh, is it only me, or did everyone get chills?

I hope you write this.
It seems it'll be really cool c:

i love it! write soon i cant wait to read it!!!!!!!!!!!

I really hope you start this! With just those two lines, I'm hooked.

I cannot wait for this to come out. It looks so good and interesting.
start it soon<3

Omg.
So interesting with just two lines I am hooked.
Update soon <3

Looking forward to this amazing story.
Update soon.

Looking forward to this story :D
it sounds like utterly epic

Those two lines gave me chills, this sounds like a really cool story.
i hope you start it soon (: