The False Vampire - Comments

First of all, the layout is adorable. I really liked how you set down the summary. It definitely seized my attention, especially the mini check list. I thought it was really cute, especially the line Adrienne repeats to herself -- "Your such a bloody vampire". I really like your style of writing; it's simple but descriptive at the same time. I also like Adrienne’s sarcasm. It really makes reading the chapters worthwhile. I can definitely feel her longing for being normal and being able to walk out into the sun without burning to crisp. Her character is becoming more endearing as I read further down the chapters.

From the chapters I read, I noticed one mistake where you wrote: I watched a marvelled at the range of colours – I’m guessing you meant “I watched and marveled at the range of colors.

Other than that, keep up the great writing and keep updating. You are doing a great job so far. I really like where the story is heading. I only went through a couple of the chapters, but I am definitely going to go back to read the rest. This story is very original and exceptional and I cannot wait to dive into Adrienne’s world!

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I love this darling :)

I just read all the way to chapter 24 and i cant wait to see what happens next. please update soon!!!!

I totally love this story. Plz keep goin plz!!!!!!!

plz keep writing i read all the way to chapter 24 and now im super interseted
you are a amazing writer.....
and if you can check out my poems!

uh oh what wrong!!!

I just found this and fell in love with it. and im excited to see what happens next

Love the story. I find it magical in a way. Keep it going, update soon please.

Just letting you guys know - I've decided I'm not going to delete The False Vampire!

0.0 no delete!
I like the chapter please keep writing im begging!!!!
-Gets on knees-
PLEASE!!!!!!!

i'm with redda please don't delet it i really really like the story :'(

nooooooooooo!!!!!!! please don't delete it! i only just started reading it!!! PLEASE>>> IM BEGGING YOU.... NNOOOOOOOOOOOO

'FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT' XD ooh awesome.....
i cant wait to hear what happens on saturday!!
Keep on trucking...or writing... XD

I still absolutely love this! I'm addicted! keep writing! :D

“Trinnean! You are barking mad! Barking!”
“Woof”
Oh god I love this!! :D

i love this story! :) please update soooon!!! <3

I really Love this story and I cant wait for you to update more....VERY CURIOUS !!!!!!
HAHAHAH LOVE"D IT!! :D

I am really sucked into this story! I'm not sure if you're planning on posting more, but I would love to read more! In my opinion, you are a really talented writer and I'll have to check out more works from you! :D

i love this story! updates!! =D

updates! =]