The False Vampire - Comments

This is an original story! And I'm not just saying that. On some parts where it says, “Thank you,” there isn't a space between thank, and you. However, its good!

This is really great :D
I haven't seen any punctuation/grammar/spelling errors!
Definetly subscribing.
*Sighs* Would you please read on of my stories?

Beautiful layout, for starters.
It's a captivating story, I'm quite intrigued by it. Anticipating your next update :-)

The idea is quite original, I'm glad to have stumbled across this story and hope you continue to write:]

Amazing plot line CHECK

awesome charater CHECK

great writing CHECK

But are authors real???

MMMM I have no idea....>.<

I like it. Can't wait to read more.

Your such a bloody vampire

should be 'you're', because it's you and are put together.

I really like this story; Your from Wattpad?
Aha most people on here haven't even heard of it.
Cant wait to read more.

hey, the first to comment =D hahaha, this story actually sounds pretty cool, i cant wait to read more - as in, i will definitely read more...or else...
Nah, joking. But seriously, write more of it and the world will be a happier place...sort off...not realy? I dont actualyl know but yeah =D