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  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    haha that chapter was amazing lol squishies cant wait for the next UPDATTTE!! XD
    January 19th, 2011 at 12:08am
  • Miss.L.W.Revenge

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    =O i need more !!!! im way excited for the next update =D x x x
    January 18th, 2011 at 01:38pm
  • rachemical

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    loved the updates!
    and boo for derek coming back, i hope something bad wont happen D:
    so excited for the next chapter!
    oh and i prolly wont speak too if i meet mcr haha
    January 17th, 2011 at 11:33am
  • deathXbeforeXdisco

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    ABSHGDUF*&T#*@#JKJHDI&*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I'M SO EXCITED AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY! I feel like I'm actually there! And thank you so so so so much!!!!!
    EEEE!!!!
    Hailey's so nice! ^-^
    I liked the part where they were paying out the sluts. hehe, IQ of a cornflake...teehee! My favourite line ^-^
    I can't believe you just left it there though! I'm DYING for the next update...like DYING. Get an image of someone dying of thirst and hunger and crawling along a desert road with no end in sight...that's how I feel right now.
    Love your work, as always ^-^
    January 17th, 2011 at 09:38am
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    loved the update and that was pretty funny when the girls were insulting the slutty girls lol and was nice of haley to give lozzaher extra vip pass cant wait to see wut happens next!! UPDATTTTEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 17th, 2011 at 12:45am
  • LizzieLaceration

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    OMFG HURRY AND WRITE MOREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 16th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • lipsyncXlulliby

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    Ughh okay so I was trying to pull an all nighter cuz it's my birthday so I was reading a bunch of fanfics to keep me occupied and I read all of these last night now im bummed cuz I have to wait :// lame! Good update though! Stoked for the next one ;)
    January 16th, 2011 at 08:36pm
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    RAWR I hate short chapters but loved this cant wait to c wut happens @ the concert UPDAAATTTEEE soon pllleeeeaaasssseee
    January 16th, 2011 at 04:43pm
  • deathXbeforeXdisco

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    DEREK?! LEMME AT 'IM! LEMME AT 'IM! Don't wory Hailz! I'll punch his guts out for you! I'll go *kapow! kapow! pew pew pew!* He won't even be able to breathe when I'm through with him >:D
    Anywhooo...why must you keep me waiting for so long! D:
    I'm dying for the next chapter already XD That's the bad thing about being psychic for your story update XD
    So looking forwards to Hailey meeting Frankie again :D
    Hailey's really strong ^-^ I mean like emotionally and mentally to not freak out that badly about hearing Derek. ^^)
    Love your writing :D
    January 16th, 2011 at 03:48pm
  • rachemical

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    So this 'Derek' was the one who raped her, right?
    aaw Tommy is so cute! I bet it'll be fun to see him meeting My Chem haha.
    cant wait for some more!
    January 16th, 2011 at 01:17pm
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    YAY! Another chappie!
    Will this 'Derek' guy come into the picture later? Will he come up to her while she's out with Frankie and then Frankie beats the shit out of Derek? 'Cause I really want that to happen ^-^
    Tommy is so cute! And has a very good taste in music ;D
    And Dear God(<--Teehee! A7X) I hate her parents! They need to go die in a motherf-cking hole! ('scuse the language)
    I can't wait for the next chapters!!! :D :D :D
    January 16th, 2011 at 08:41am
  • lipsyncXlulliby

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    Ahh I reallly like this so far! I really can't wait for annupdate!! Anytime soon?

    Xoxo jamie
    January 16th, 2011 at 08:21am
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    SQUEEEE!!!
    I shouldn't have read this so early, I'm like dying to read the next bits already XD
    I absolutely LOVED it! Frankie is so sweet!
    And why only ALMOST kiss? D:
    And why didn't she spear Kim's and Ashley's heads on a picket or stake or something?
    As I said before, I loved it and can't wait for more :D
    And thanks for the shout out <3
    January 15th, 2011 at 07:03pm
  • Miss.L.W.Revenge

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    =O o...m....g Kim has some serious issues ! Whats gunna happen now????? I wanna know , I wanna know!!! Sorry I'm hyper =] x
    January 14th, 2011 at 01:59pm
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    Whoa! Kim's a BITCH! What's going to happen between everyone and the guys now?
    I think Hailey should smack Kim and Ashley's faces into a bunch of elephant poop.
    And then steal the earrings and throw them in Mount Doom. (No, that totally wasn't a Lord of the Rings reference. I don't know what you're talking about XD)
    I love the character of Hailey though ^-^ And Tommy's cute ^^)
    MOAR! MOAR! MOAR! XD
    Honestly, I can't wait for the next chappie.
    January 14th, 2011 at 11:04am
  • rachemical

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    wtf, Kim betrayed her friends just for earrings?
    she deserved that slap from Hailey haha.
    i wonder what how would Gerard react to this. I mean, he has feelings for her right?
    cant wait for more update!
    January 14th, 2011 at 10:18am
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    WOOOOTT loved the update an OOOO go hailey she bitch slapped those bitches she should've punched them instaed but still AWESOME! UPDATTTEE SOON
    January 14th, 2011 at 12:39am
  • rachemical

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    Nooo, why did Kim betray her friends? I guess I should wait til next chapter. Can't wait!
    January 13th, 2011 at 01:24am
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    AHHH i FUCKING LOVEEEE this story i cant wait to see what happens next an wow ionna is not a good friend i cant believe she let ashley talk about them like that SKANK ! lol UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
    January 13th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • Miss.L.W.Revenge

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    awwww dude noooooo UPDATE SOON i cant take cliff hangers ! x
    January 12th, 2011 at 11:47pm
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