Life is Beautiful - Comments

La-la-la-la-LOVE the layout<33 It's so pretty

I like the quote in the beginning, even though it's not a real summary it gives a hint as to what the story will be about. It's a bit vague, but it does get my wheels turning about what this will be about. The detail in this is phenomenal (sp?) When I first glanced at this I saw it was short and I was expecting just a bunch of quick introductions, you know? But I absolutely love the way I can really see the characters so far and I barely know anything about them. I honestly have no idea what's going on in this scene, but the emotions are so raw and conflicting that I can't help but love it. The last line could not have been more perfect, it honestly made me want to cry a little bit (in a good way!)

This was so beautiful, I'm definitely subscribing and I can't wait until you update! :D

Oh my goodness! That detailing is just, bah! It's amazing, beautiful, spectacular, all of the above!
My only problem was the few grammatical errors you had. Also, it would help to break up the 2 or 3 big paragraphs into smaller ones to make it easier on the eyes, but in terms of the actual story itself, I loved it (: Really, I did. And that last line, wow. Just left me hanging, completely. And it's only the prologue!
I'll be looking out for the next updates, <3
Stay lovely and talented, always (:

Wow, this is good. I just think you need to space it out a little bit (the paragraphs) and you're good. I liked this. Is he going to war? I have no idea where he's going but I do know he's going somewhere. You gave little dialogue and alot of description. The description was just write and so was the dialogue so don't fus about that.

I'm gonna subscribe and I'll be waiting for more. :"D

The layout is soft and cute plus Channing Tatum is a babe which is always a plus. I like the colors they go well together and don't hurt my eyes.

The summary... well theres nothing to go off of but (call me weird) I like when they are short enough not to give anything away but long enough to draw you in and this one did both so congrats on that!

Most struggle with saying to much or not enough to make a reader interested but you found a good balance.

WHY HAVE YOU NOT FINISHED THIS? IT IS BEAUTIFUL, IT IS AMAZING, IT IS A PIECE OF HEAVEN!

You should write more ;)

Soo... eh... hello again?
I don't know if you remember me, but I'm back.. aha?
OH SHIT. Yeah I feel horrible for not commenting all in the past, what, 2 months? o.o
There's not really much I do, considering I don't even have something close to a miserable excuse as to why I didn't comment. School, maybe? Gosh, I don't even know lol
Anyways, I read the chapters that I missed, and you really haven't changed; you're still the same talented writer. (:
Hopefully, I'll stick around to read the upcoming beautiful chapters, yeah? <3

P.S -- Ross giving his sweater to Cammy was truly adorable <3

Just letting you know: I printed out this story on my computer so I can read it when I'm driving all the way home. This story is so amazing, I'm reading the first half again! :D don't stop writing.

I feel terrible not commenting on your golden shizz! But I'm whorin' it all now.

HERE COMES THE WHORE MONSTER! WOOT!

I've read what you've posted so far. I like it! Hope to see more! =D *Now subscribing.* And I must say really liked how in the 2nd chapter you had a picture of the note instead of typing it. Very clever! ^_^

Oh: Yes, Chrissie is an interesting character. =) Very unique.

OMG I love it!!!!!!!!

Aweee I just wish Ross would stop being so grrr about it. =[

I finally caught up. (: This is an absolute gem, I adore reading it. Your descriptions are flawless, and you balance the right amount of detail and dialogue. You portray her feelings well, Camille is a well rounded character and absolutely adorably. I just want to cuddle her and tell her it will all be alright... I think Ross is equally as cute in his own distant way.

I love the characters, the interaction. Everything flows seamlessly... I can't wait to see where this goes, or ends. I have a feeling I will be upset to see it end, as I'm already rather attached to Camille. I don't want her to die.. Gah! Update soon. I truly love this story!

You're a talented writer, by the way. Just thought I would state the obvious. I may change my mind if you kill Cammy though. >_>

i like the layout and the plot seems interesting (:

I LOVE THIS STORY (even though I probably already told you that before). I have one question: If Ross and Camille were inspired by Nana-chan and Yano from Bokura ga Ita, does that mean Jason kind of started out kinda like Takeuchi? I mean, it was mentioned first in the anime that Take was gay, but then later on disregarded that and he confessed he loved Nana (got confused at first by this info, but just shrugged it off). So... is that why Jason sometimes likes braiding hair and stuff? Just wondering...

Ross' name doesn't really catch me, his name should be as cool as Camille's! xx

I've only read the prologue, but I really love it so far. You manage to balance the right amount of detail and imagery, which is a talent. It's different and new, and already has a sense of raw emotion. It's difficult to write about illnesses and the characters reactions but you have grasped it so easily. I love the little twist at the end, it's the perfect introduction.

I really enjoy your style of writing, and I'll probably read all the chapters until I'm up to date tomorrow - and I mean that. It's not often I find a story I like, you've got my attention. I look forward to reading the rest. ~

So I'm reading the latest update for you :3

sorry this took so long.

First off, the layout is lovely, it's so peaceful and tranquil, it's really nice.

since i really have no idea what's going on, i'm can't really comment on the character's or anything, but from what i've read, i'd really enjoy this story. i'm thinking about going to the beginning and reading the whole thing. this chapter is really funny (chapter 19) and you're a good writer. keep it up.

Chapter One: I really like the beginning. The way you slowly described Camille was wonderful. I could catch on to her fears easily and that's a good thing. One thing that bothered me a bit was the switch to focusing on the outside world. It seemed sort of sudden, I like that you switched, it just could have had something better to lead it into that switch.

Chapter Two: I feel horribly for Camille. Children can often be very rude and you portrayed the kids perfectly. Their reactions to her illness was wonderful. I like that you switched to seven years later, I've seen a lot of stories keep adding up on the years, chapter by chapter and let me just say, it's sort of just a drag if you know what I mean.

Chapter Three: This was a really nice introduction to Ross, by the way, I really like his name. I like that you've introduced three new characters who I assume will be regulars by the way you've described them. In just this one chapter I've gotten their personalities down. I love your foreshadowing skills too very epic.

Your layout and banner are precious, may I just say.
I like this so far, it's an interesting story with the element of terminal illness. I feel bad for Camille that she is so young and so sick :/ You write very nicely, I like the descriptions you use. I think descriptions are very important in a story and you've provided that. Great job so far, I'm going to sub!

I don't like things that make me cry, and now I'm a sobbing mess; WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME? :C

No, but really, this is gorgeous<3 I am such a sucker for detail and good descriptions, and this just made me so freaking happy and light-headed~

And the layout is beautiful, I could stare at this story forever and ever.

I will definitely be subscribing.

I really like the layout. The colors in it are just really nice, and it has kind of a happy feel to it.

Even though I only read the latest chapter I can tell that this story is very well written, and it seems like you have the characters and everything established and well planned out.

From what I see you're doing a great job! I may even read more!

And, sorry for commenting late, I had to do something earlier.

I love the layout, it created the feeling of unconditional love and happiness for me. I don't know why but, it is effective :) Alhtough the photo on your layout is black and white, you have used a pale colour in contrast to it. Lovely!

I also like the quote at the beginning of chapter one, the prologue.

Now about the actually story you have written! Sorry, for babbling on. The amount of detail you have put into this is incredible, seriously. You have really brought me to feel like I know the little girl too. And then when she realises she is the girl. Completely changed round from what I thought it was going to be.
I liked it. A lot :)