Life is Beautiful - Comments

You really painted a picture in my mind, the detail wasn't to over done but perfectly done. I love the quote at the beginning of the story, it matches the story title(:
The layout goes well with i, & I adore how you ended the prologue with That girl was me, Camille Rose.
Overeall I think this is amazing and just great, good job on it(:

I loved the new update. Ross is finally facing his feelings. And I love how he got confronted. I can't wait to see what happens on their outing.

I love the layout- it's like icy cool and airy and it really gives off a nice feeling to it. I really like it, it's sort of like a winter-wonderland!

Your attention to detail is pretty much amazing, oh my god. I am seriously in complete awe of this. Rose petal lips? Snow-like skin? It's so freaking pretty these words are, it's pretty much poetic, no big deal or anything. But I like how you definitely capture how a little girl would feel, just how utterly confused and just angry she is. It's not like she knows that death is around the corner, she just cares about how soft her blanket is. I think you did that part really well.

And I adore too, how you mention life goes on, because it's so damn true. The little girl is pretty much dying and people are just going about their lives. I mean, so am I too though, right? It's like the harsh reality of it all.

I think that it could've been broken off into more paragraphs though, because it's sort of block-y, at least to me. I do like the idea though, I've never read of someone with tuberculosis, despite how common it can be, while other people usually pounce on things like cancer and such, I'm sort of glad you picked something new! :)

I'll totally be coming back to this, but I have to go to bed now! But just the prologue- hot damn girl you got some talent! :D

Wow. I love the detail in this. It was like reading a legit novel (which happens to be one of my only hobbies >.>). I know I only read the most recent update, but I'm going to go back and read this entire story. You made me laugh when the boys teased Ross, and you made me squeal with glee when Jason set up their outing and I've only read this part. The story seems optimistic, which is a nice change from a lot of the things I read :) I'm definitely going to subscribe - this is beautifully written

Jason is so friggin' cute. Ah, I love him. And Ross is so in denial. I love Drari's name. <3

Okay, first off, I love the layout. It's very nice.

Second, you have an awesome writing style and you use lots of detail, which I love. And I do adore your word choices. I didn't seen any grammar errors, just a typo: Drai blinked is eyes a few times, but he remained staring at us with squinting eyes. ...blink his eyes, is what it should be right? And All, in all, very entertaining. I haven't read the rest, but this makes me want to. ^^

And then that last line. Omigod! What the f*ck?! I mean, what's going on here? That's what really makes me curious, and I find it to be a wonderful way to end the chapter. It makes the reader...well, read on. It makes then need to. Only thing is that it isn't so good for the reader...because they have to wait for the next chapter. I think you depressed a lot of fans with that one. But really awesome job!

And I'm going to have to subscribe and read the whole thing, no? Please continue~! <3

This is beautifully written; I only read the first two chapters and I am going to read on.
I love the layout for starters It is amazing and cute.
I love the way you describe things and how you came up with this type of story.
I am jealous how you have perfect grammar and no spelling errors.
I Will subscribe and I hope you make more stories your very good at writing.

Let me start off ny saying this is one of the best stories I've read on Mibba. Your characterization is pristine. I love Camille and her sweetness. Jason is a dear and bubble character as well. I'm still waiting to know his backstory. You took regular teenage drama and love qualms and dropped it into this dearly fatal situation. I want Camille to live. It's actually sad because she is zoo sweet. But I am now a faithful reader..

I like this story. It's very good and the layout I think matched it perfectly. However for me the text was too small so I think it took a little longer for me to read.

Also a few technical errors being you don't need to capitalize mom or dad unless it is an actual name and dailouge has it's own sentence. In the second chapter on the playground I notcied Camlie was talking and it was a whole paragraph explaining her actions and thoughts. I think that is okay, but just know that when anoter person talks you have to go to the next line.

Also in dailouge, after someone is done talking and you are going to tell the reader who said it, you just need a comma floowed by the name of the person or the action they are about to do.

Other then that I like it. Looking at the genre- romance teen and drama, I am assuming she is gonna meet a guy who actually give her a chance and they become lovers right? lol ell since it is under my favoetie genres and since you now got me hooked. You got yourself a 33rd subcriber :)

And what do you know there is no spell check on this page for me to check over my own spelling -_-

I love this story! Only on chapter two and I love it. I'm sort of writing a story along the same lines, just wish that it was as good as yours! I NEED to keep reading

This story is incredible! I almost cried while reading the first chapter! It was full of so much emotion, I could just feel Camille's rejection and sadness. I got so into the story and I am definitely going to subscribe!

Point one: I love the layout, simple but beautiful.

Point two: I love the writing styel and detail. I can really tell that you put lots of work into this. And I like being able to tell when something has lots of effort behind it, it lets me know you didn't pull it all out of your ass and that you really care about what you're writing.

Point three: The plot seems really interesting, and I like that.

All in all, please keep up the good work

Awesome chapter! I'm glad that Jason's being so nice about it, and that he doesn't know about her yet! Oh, and I'm also happy that theres gonna be a turn now! :D Keep up the great work!

LMFAO. I figured Jason didn't win the bear. He's so adorable.<3

So I see you used my idea ;D
Well I'm glad <33
When Camille and Ross saw each other, I loled xD
They're so adorable <3
I kinda want you to update soon because I love this series but also so you can begin "The Good Life" :/
Must I remind you of the poor defenseless babies? :V
Update Soon! XD

Your story, overall, is really good.
I read the entire sixteen chapters in a few hours!
I was bummed when there weren't more updates.
I like all the characters, especially Camille.
She seems really cute. :3
Anyhow, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see a new update!

While green shall always be my most beloved color, I absolutely heart your layout!

Stories with illness seem to draw me in. I'm not really sure why; maybe I just like how it's so real, ya know? Anywho, I feel so sad that her friends shied away from her. That wasn't very nice of them. Kids are cruel. I like how the parent's saw her pain and bought a new house, giving her the chance for a new start. And I can't wait to read about her story! I'm subbing, chicka! <3

While green shall always be my most beloved color, I absolutely heart your layout!

Stories with illness seem to draw me in. I'm not really sure why; maybe I just like how it's so real, ya know? Anywho, I feel so sad that her friends shied away from her. That wasn't very nice of them. Kids are cruel. I like how the parent's saw her pain and bought a new house, giving her the chance for a new start. And I can't wait to read about her story! I'm subbing, chicka! <3

While green shall always be my most beloved color, I absolutely heart your layout!

Stories with illness seem to draw me in. I'm not really sure why; maybe I just like how it's so real, ya know? Anywho, I feel so sad that her friends shied away from her. That wasn't very nice of them. Kids are cruel. I like how the parent's saw her pain and bought a new house, giving her the chance for a new start. And I can't wait to read about her story! I'm subbing, chicka! <3

Camille is just soo.. adorable and child-like. So innocent, y'know? lol (:
Even though I'm more rooting for Ross, I do love Jason's determination! But Roooosssss, you should make a move, dear. I felt a twinge in my heart in the end, too. D:
Beauuutiful chapter; you never cease to amazing me. <3
I enjoyed the long cute chapter! :D
Can't wait for what's next. (:

I absolutely adore the way that Ross describes seeing Camille with his hat in her hands. It's almost childlike and full of wonder in the sort of way that he can't really believe SHE was the one who found his hat. And she just seems really, really cute about the whole thing.

Oh Jason. Poor guy. I totally understand about the nervous babbling though, I feel like that's a popular way of nervously trying to talk to the person you like, haha.

Oh my goshhhh. That scene with the teddy bear and Jason and the hug and Ross D: I'm torn. But for some reason a part of me feels like Jason didn't really win the teddy bear for Camille. I feel like he stole it or something. Even Ross made that comment that he felt like they couldn't win the game without cheating. I dunno. I want to believe the best in everybody but I feel like Jason's being a bit sneaky *wiggles eyebrows*

Camille is such a beautiful character, so innocent and yet strong on the inside. I like that she's making the best of a bad situation instead of wallowing in self pity and refusing to take part in anything. I'm such a fan of this :D