I'm liking Daniel more and more now. He's such an adorable jerk-face ♥ And Alexis. I love her, as always. I'm so glad you'll be updating tomorrow! I can't wait :)
I really do love this story. I love that she does have flaws, like her resentment/jealousy over her brother and how she's kind of arrogant- it's refreshing that she's not some perfectly nice girl, because none of us can be perfectly nice (we've all got cat's claws at times ;) Thanks for the updating! :) xx
Can't read much, but what I have read is pretty good. I love the fact that for one everyone isn't emo that annoys me and honestly I have never seen the most popular person in the school be emo.
I also love the idea. I'll comment more when I actually finish a chapter.
Great chapter ! I didn't realize you were an Aussie! We seen to be few and far between here on Mibba. I figured you were English because of the way you spell 'Mum' and the fact that Alexis has a locker :P My school just made us lug our bags around all day. I guess your school must be better than mine. Or at least less tight with the budget! Anyway, I'm totally loving this story! It's so different to anything else I've read, and I love how Alexis is different from your typical Mary-Sue. Keep up the good stuff !
There are a bunch of things I love about this story:
a) it's the "popular" girl as opposed to the usual "scene/emo/loner/loser/girl-next-door/nerd" that most people go with. b)the banner is awesome and so is the layout c)the plot idea is original, etc. d)Daniel is, so far, a real jerk. Not a fake jerk. Hopefully he'll get nicer with time? e)Alexis has a reason for a crappy home life. Not the usual "her parents don't like her" but "the parents have something else to deal with which makes them less attentive about her" f)the title g)the twist where Justin goes from "potential love interest" to "jerkface"
OMG UPDATE SOON PLEASE! Weekly, biweekly, triweekly, everyday, just update, please! I can't wait to see where this story goes. And I'll definitely be adding it to the "what mibba story should you read next" thing :)
I really like it. I can kind of relate to Alexis how people are so quick to judge instead of actually getting to know them. I hope you update really soon.
This is really good, i always try to write high school fictions and I never seem to be very good at it and always end up deleting my stories. I think this story we can all relate to a little since we are all either at high school or been through it. Subscribe.