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  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    ahh yeay, things are working out between then.
    July 6th, 2011 at 11:07am
  • idontfitinwithyou

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    This is amazing and one of my favourite stories at the moment!
    Please update tomorrow :D
    July 6th, 2011 at 09:07am
  • fading;fairytales

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    meeeh one chapter left ):
    this one was so goood. it felt kinda real.
    July 6th, 2011 at 08:25am
  • lillian;

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    I think this story is absolutely amazing (:
    July 6th, 2011 at 06:04am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    OMG HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT?!?!?! WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY?!?!?!

    The way you described the entire scene where they kiss was just unbelievable. I could picture the entire thing in my mind. I could totally tell that Alex was pleased that he wasn't the only one that had those feelings hidden inside this entire time. I think they were just afraid to tell one another because they were worried about what the other's reaction would be, but the way you planned the entire thing out to lead up to this was awesome. It was intense and romantic and everything I could have imagined! lol. It was perfect.....except the end. Like what the hell?! That left me confused and wanting more! That's what incredible writers do to their readers and you just did that to me. I can't even put into words how freaking incredible your writing is and how freaking incredible this story is.

    And like I said before, I'm going to miss reading this story SO much. I'm probably going to make up stuff in my head so it will just continue in my mind haha. I'm looking forward to reading your other stories though, like "Band-Aids." :)

    I'm going to miss this story. A lot. Oh yeah, I've already said that. I guess you already know that I'm going to miss reading this story then huh? Tomorrow or whenever you update the last chapter is going to be a very sad day and I'm pretty sure I will cry because your other stories have brought tears to my eyes before and I'm sure this one will as well. I don't know if it will end on a happy note or a sad note, but either way, I'm almost positive it will bring tears to my eyes lol.

    I really hope you update tomorrow!! :) You deserve those 15-20 comments or however many more you receive because this story is nothing short of amazing. You did such an amazing job with it. Thank you so much for putting this out there for us to read....I enjoyed every chapter :) I'm beyond excited for chapter 19! <3

    You're amazing Emily. Don't ever forget that :)

    <3 Kelsey
    July 6th, 2011 at 05:20am
  • bisbisqwert

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    HOLY TITTY FUCK. ILOVEYOUSOMUCHRIGHTNOWIT'SBORDERLINECREEPY.
    So, you wanna know how many times I re-read this chapter? DO YOU? Six. SIX, motherfucker. You think I'm exaggerating, or saying it to fluff your ego? No. I read this chapter SIX times, and enjoyed it more each time. Seriously. I can't even stress how much I love your writing and this story and just EVERYTHING concerning it. Jesus. And I love that you updated because of what I said. I read that chapter in the morning, and then I thought about it all day. Yes, I do get THAT involved in the stories I read. And then I thought about the comment I had left, and I was like, "I have to give this girl some more love." So, if it made you happy and in an updatey mood, then I'm jazzed, but really I was just being completley honest. My attachment to this story is ridiculous, un-natural, and definetly unhealthy.
    Like AHHHHH. That was my exact reaction. I can't even put it into words. I absolutley. Fucking. Love. This. Chapter. I was so ecstatic, I was clapping like a retarded seal.

    I wish I could get more people to comment on this story, because you absolutley deserve the lovin' chick. Sooooo, ANYWAYS, I'm super sad that this story is ending, and hoping you'll start a new one.
    I just thought you deserved a super long comment, so here you have it. I love this story, I love your writing, and even though I have never met you and for all I know you could be some creepy 40 year old man, ILOVEYOU. Thank you, for being a great writer.

    Too much? I just thought you shoud be well aware of my love for this story, and all of your stories in general.
    July 6th, 2011 at 04:45am
  • codiodi1

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    ah. i LOVED these past two chapters. i am seriously so sad that theres only one chapter left.
    i predict that alex is gonna die.
    just sayin.
    you HAAAAAVE to update tomorrow! i can't wait till friday!
    July 6th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • Matt Flyzik

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    HOLY SHIT! UPDATE NOW!
    jddjsnakaj.
    I love you, but I hate you for giving that cliff hanger, but then I still love you.
    Anyways, update tomorrow! Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaassssssseeeeee?!?!?!?
    July 6th, 2011 at 04:30am
  • brittneyhuff

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    i love this story.
    i can't believe its almost over!
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    July 6th, 2011 at 04:27am
  • saintwithoutacause

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    no why must this story end haha but seriously don't doubt your writing ever because you're seriously one of my favorite authors on here. i'm always looking forward to more of your chapters and i hope you reach your goal because i can't wait until friday for this chapter lol
    July 6th, 2011 at 04:18am
  • Hipsterism

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    I can't believe this is almost over!!
    I absolutely loved this story and that I was able to read it when you started posting it from the beginning :))))
    The way you wrote Alex in this is really really good :))
    I will keep reading the stories you post, you can count on that!!!
    I'm trying to write a story of my own, but I don't have the time. (I haven't posted the first chapter yet)
    It would be awesome if you read it before I posted some of it, just so I know it won't be a complete disaster. It would mean sooo much :)
    July 6th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • Hipsterism

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    I can't believe this is almost over!!
    I absolutely loved this story and that I was able to read it when you started posting it from the beginning :))))
    The way you wrote Alex in this is really really good :))
    I will keep reading the stories you post, you can count on that!!!
    I'm trying to write a story of my own, but I don't have the time. (I haven't posted the first chapter yet)
    It would be awesome if you read it before I posted some of it, just so I know it won't be a complete disaster. It would mean sooo much :)
    July 6th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    Please update tomorrow I NEED to know what happens!!!!
    July 6th, 2011 at 03:55am
  • Grade.A.Catastrophe

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    I cannot believe this story's almost over :(
    I hope they make it out of the forest by the end!
    July 6th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • Rae M Wakefield

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    I'm SO OBSESSED WITH THIS!!! <3 it!
    July 6th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • FunGh0ulz

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    Check this picture! http://30.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lnt40nbPQQ1qlaonbo1_500.jpg
    It reminds me of pretty follies <3
    I love this story, I wish It never had to end. It's definitely in like, my top 3.
    Okay scrap that.
    THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVERRRR.
    update?
    July 5th, 2011 at 02:54pm
  • bisbisqwert

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    Okay. So I realize that I've already commented with my thoughts on the previous chapter, and that this is pretty pathetic, what I'm doing right now, but I couldn't help it. I want you to know, that since you started this story, you've not only provided me with hours of entertainment, but you've also made my top 5 favorite stories (which, I can assure you, is not an easy task).
    But after this chapter, I'm definetly going to have to say that as of now, this is my favorite story on here. EVER.
    No, I did not comment an extra time just to say that.

    The purpose of this comment(cue drumroll) is to BEG, on my KNEES, for you to update this story MONDO quickly. Like, at warp speed. I am not a very patient person, and all I can say is that if you take time out of what is (I'm sure) a hectic day to write another chapter,THE SECOND you see this, you will make me an extremly happy girl. Like, ecstatic. CRYING tears of happiness. Wow, this is pathetic. But, I'm hoping, pathetic enough to score me a quick update? PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE Update.

    Okay, I'm done wasting your time. I just HAD to do that.
    July 5th, 2011 at 04:26am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    So I don't know if you noticed this as well, but as I was reading I noticed there were some song titles/lyrics in this chapter.
    The ones I saw was: Weird by Hilary Duff (okay...so I used to be obsessed with her. A long time ago I might add haha).
    Guts - All Time Low
    Freaking Me Out - Simple Plan (featuring Alex Gaskarth)
    I just thought I'd point that out...I didn't know if you intented to put that in there or you just wrote it without thinking anything of it! lol

    Anyways....THEY KISSED!!!! OMG FINALLY. lol.
    Stoked for the next chapter!!!
    I seriously get so excited when I see you updated Emily.
    This is such an amazing story and I'm going to be really sad when it ends.
    Amazing update!! I still can't believe they kissed!!!! ahhh!!! haha.
    <3 Kelsey
    July 5th, 2011 at 12:34am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    July 4th, 2011 at 09:56pm
  • saintwithoutacause

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhh finally!!!
    July 4th, 2011 at 08:07pm