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  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    I LOVE THAT CHAPTER <3
    December 15th, 2011 at 08:56pm
  • Star Angel

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    More update soon
    December 11th, 2011 at 10:04pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    : ( Epic yet again. So sad, and its...all I can say is Wow.
    November 23rd, 2011 at 07:06am
  • topless

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    No no no no, not her too.
    Shiiit.
    This is amazing and disgusting and flawless and just, so many emotions.
    November 20th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Update soon please ^.^
    November 20th, 2011 at 01:23pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Wow I love it! Please update! that chapter is like really upsetting and good.
    November 10th, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • topless

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    I'm blown away by this.
    I really am.
    You're a fantastic writer and wow.
    November 4th, 2011 at 07:32pm
  • Kimmeecat08

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    this is so amazing. I love it.
    November 4th, 2011 at 03:02pm
  • Kimmeecat08

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    this is so amazing. I love it.
    November 4th, 2011 at 03:02pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Wooowwww! That last chapter was REALLY powerful. THe way she described her sister at the end. Just wheeewwww! Wow. I can't wait for your next update!
    October 12th, 2011 at 01:37pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Wooowwww! That last chapter was REALLY powerful. THe way she described her sister at the end. Just wheeewwww! Wow. I can't wait for your next update!
    October 12th, 2011 at 01:37pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Aww! Something different here! I love it :) Is something going to happen with Evan? I completely didn't see this twist coming!
    September 20th, 2011 at 03:50pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    You know this is really amazing. It is one of the best unpublished verse novels i've read in a while. If it continues on this way it wouldn't be hard for you to get it published at all.
    September 20th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Ahem.

    Update soon

    Please

    Before my

    Heart breaks
    September 17th, 2011 at 10:10pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I was happy to read an update. Shes having a breakdown, uhoh, much love as usual though.
    September 17th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Umm major twist much? Wow. I really love this story! I can't wait till you update again :3
    September 6th, 2011 at 08:06pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Love. Smileing faces aren't always happy faces. : ( Eh, I loved it yet again. Powerful!
    September 3rd, 2011 at 06:06am
  • GraceJones

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    *gasps* He knows!!
    What happens next? Update soon!
    That was rather unexpected :)
    September 2nd, 2011 at 10:11am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Every single time I read this it is more and more beautiful and just as sad. One thing I find very powerful about this story is as a past abused child I can really like... Relate to this story. It's amazing.
    August 21st, 2011 at 08:13pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    This is beyond amazing. Its tear jerking, but beautiful. I'm going to make a wild guess at Evan being the boy from her childhood that she saw used? Also, I agree....just another name on the role...its to true for many people. Your verses they remind so one of my fav. verse novelist's work, Ellen Hopkins. If you haven't read her books, you should check them out. They deal with real life things, and they remind me a lot of your work. Anywho, offically one of my fav. mibba stories. : )
    August 20th, 2011 at 08:19am
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