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  • GraceJones

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    I like that last line.
    "....Just another name on the role."
    It's symbolic and true, i like it :)
    August 12th, 2011 at 01:37pm
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    Holy wow. This is AMAZING. you are such a talented writer. It's such a sad story:( but you can really feel the emotions and spend a few minutes in her mind. I love the way it's set up too. Well done (:
    August 10th, 2011 at 12:22am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Heart wrenching and beautiful - as usual!
    August 5th, 2011 at 08:48pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Ahhh! I want to know more... Update soon please?
    July 31st, 2011 at 05:03pm
  • Painted Smiles

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    I absolutley love this story! It's really amazing...in a happy/sad kind of way :/
    I actually read all the chapters you posted in 10/15 minutes! I couldn't wait to see what happened next! What was the first title for this? Anyways, keep up the AMAZING work! ;D :D <3 :p
    July 17th, 2011 at 10:30am
  • GraceJones

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    As powerful as usual :)

    What happens Next?
    July 17th, 2011 at 09:50am
  • worldclass

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    Ahhhhh! Still loving it :)
    July 5th, 2011 at 10:40am
  • ScubaGirl

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    This is so good :)
    June 24th, 2011 at 04:00pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    You know you're going to update this, right?
    June 24th, 2011 at 02:28pm
  • GraceJones

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    Whooo is eeet?
    June 24th, 2011 at 02:22pm
  • worldclass

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    Most people delete all the chapters in a story and put a note up saying that they're rewriting and post as they go. It's better than deleting the story completely because you keep all your subscribers. I don't think there's any rule against duplicate posting, as long as you go back and delete the unedited version at the end.
    June 18th, 2011 at 07:54am
  • GraceJones

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    It is poetic :)

    Thats a lotta chapters~! I have nooo idea about that, you might be allowed to. Ask someone? Like a moderator or someone.....It Should be allowed if it's your own story.
    June 17th, 2011 at 11:15am
  • worldclass

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    Ugh. Who agrees with that? Like, I can imagine someone saying that in a fit of idiotic frustration or whatever, but I can't imagine anyone giggling in agreement. And yet those people exist. Disgusting. What happened to the guy who appeared earlier? He kind of disappeared. Oh, well. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
    June 15th, 2011 at 08:48am
  • GraceJones

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    I /Hate/ people like that.

    No idea what's going on. Although people who know what's going on and make a big fuss about it to draw attention to themselves are just as bad :/

    Why can't people be nice?
    June 12th, 2011 at 02:01pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    I really liked that story.
    June 11th, 2011 at 11:17am
  • GraceJones

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    *likes*
    I re-read the summary of the story and the first lines seem like the beginning of a song to me....
    June 11th, 2011 at 07:30am
  • GraceJones

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    Woot. You updated xD
    I like it, the poem is veery good.

    Will the teacher figure something out?
    May 29th, 2011 at 01:03pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Wow! I really really enjoyed the latest chapter! The poem was very good, very much to my taste. Will the teacher see a hidden message that could save her?!
    May 29th, 2011 at 11:51am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Yet another fantastic chapter! I'm really happy that this is getting more popular! I'm seriously loving this girl!
    May 20th, 2011 at 11:12pm
  • GraceJones

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    Woooo i got mentioned xD
    Update again!
    May 20th, 2011 at 12:46pm