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  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Wow hon! It just keeps getting better and better! Will Eve notice the cuts on her face?! Dx
    May 18th, 2011 at 07:27pm
  • GraceJones

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    I like it :D
    It's sad but intriguing, i really like it.
    I love the name too, what was it called before?
    May 18th, 2011 at 01:06pm
  • Count Your Blessings

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    *Excited Scream* I got a shoutout!! :P Never had one of them before :D And i like the new chapter lots :)
    May 16th, 2011 at 02:44pm
  • saber cat lucas

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    I love it and the new name!!!
    May 15th, 2011 at 10:37pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Wow, I felt that chapter >.< Poor girl :/ Update again soon! And thank you for giving me a mention :) It meant a lot! <3
    May 15th, 2011 at 01:06pm
  • Star Angel

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    Wow I love this please add more soon
    May 15th, 2011 at 09:50am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Oh Wow! That was soooo sad :'( THe men who are capable of doing that to their family are the sickest kind of people. They don't think of anyone but themselves and they're incapable of love. It's just sick. Loved the update!
    May 14th, 2011 at 09:38am
  • Count Your Blessings

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    This is beautiful in a very sad way :)
    May 14th, 2011 at 08:33am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    I like this title :3 It very much suits it. Something is fishy about the fact that her dad didn't even do what ever he does to Ivy that night and he didn't notice her hair... What will happen next?!
    May 13th, 2011 at 07:47pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Ahh! Please update soon! :3 It seems like every chapter ending is a cliff hanger with you cause the suspense keeps building and building!
    May 8th, 2011 at 01:34pm
  • Lucky Star.

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    wow...
    this is amazing...
    *speechless*
    May 8th, 2011 at 06:30am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    You never fail to amaze me and make me happy even though it's a sad story. Just updating makes me happy :3 You've left me in suspence... I want to know what happens next! I seriously LOVE your writing style. I've only ever read one other verse novel and I didn't really like it. But I love this.
    May 7th, 2011 at 12:58am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Amazing again :3 Update soon?
    May 1st, 2011 at 01:00pm
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Fufufuffuufufufufuufufufufufufu I love everything about the story! I love the formatting, I love the way it's written in verses. I love the plot. I love the mystery of it all. And I can't wait to find out what happens next!
    April 30th, 2011 at 10:03pm
  • worldclass

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    I love the formatting and verse-style of each chapter. And the plot is picking up too. I wonder why he seems familiar.....
    April 30th, 2011 at 08:39am
  • worldclass

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    This story just keeps getting better and better. :)
    April 28th, 2011 at 10:15am
  • worldclass

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    No probs :) still loving this <3
    April 23rd, 2011 at 09:05am
  • worldclass

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    I love this! I'm hoping that eventually we get some plot going, so that it simply isn't just a record of a girl's abuse but rather than something comes out of it. It doesn't matter when, but I do hope that something happens eventually.
    April 22nd, 2011 at 09:46am
  • MemoriesOfLoveLost

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    Love love love love love <3 People who have abusive fathers could most likely definitely relate to this :3
    April 21st, 2011 at 11:49am
  • lolitaworks

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    The story is well written and has a good idea to it - I like your writing style, it reminds me of Elle Hopkins. I think you should write more, I'll definitely be subscribing.
    April 21st, 2011 at 07:53am
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