Frank shouldn't think vintage Transformers cartoons are something to be proud of, the big fucking kid, lol. And thanks for all the strange Batman/Robin shit I've got going through my head... the fuck, you've scarred me for life now!
“Wait, marbles aren't sharp. . .?"
I love Frankie, I do, I do, I do! He's so adorable, I want one! Bless him and losing his happy thoughts. Will he ever find a truly happy time?
Ack! I just now realized I mispelled "write" in the very last sentence. I'm not a big fan of typos that are right under my nose >.< I didn't mean to get your hopes up that someone else had commented but the typo was bugging me. I'm sorry :'( I still really love this story though!
*fan girl* oh my geezers this story is effing hilarious and I had to keep myself from laughing because its late at night and I'm supposed to be in bed (according to the people who claim they're my parents)
*laid-back side* Well this story is pretty 'amazing' as my fan girl side puts it. There are some grammatical errors here and there in the chapters but I don't think it would be enough to greatly affect the problem. However, if you are a perfectionist, as some people are, I would suggest proofreading your chapters before you post them or putting them on Word and spell checking them (if you have it).
I really like the way you've written this story and captured how the human mind thinks, which is pretty much jumbled up thoughts moving at a fast pace. I really think you've captured Gerard and Frankie pretty well and I'm really excited to see this story unfold.
*fan girl* squeel! please right more! I love this story!
I absolutely adore Frank and Mikey's jokey little bantering, I like that they rip the shit out of each other, it's hilarious. And Frank's mum is awesome, offering cookies, oh nom, nom, nom. Of course you can't be kidnapped on an empty stomach!
I can't wait to see what Gerard will say when he sees his brother, I bet he's going to be pissed. That's going to be a fun one to read :D
“Oh why of course silly! I'm not gonna send you off to a dangerous place on an empty stomach! What kind of a host do you think I am?” She smiles at me and walks into the kitchen. this is AMAZING ahahaha Frankie's mommy is so awesome :) I mean who wants to get kidnapped and possibly killed on an empty stomach?! Certainly not I :O ahaha Anyways, this is by far my favorite chapter :) It's got this cute element going for it, and plus... I adore the Frikey friendship, you dont see enough friendships close enough to tell the person they are drop dead gorgeous while meaning it in the most friendly of ways XD ahahaha Anyways, I can't wait to see what Gerard says to this all... Will he be mad and Frank for kidnapping his baby brother or forkidnapping his baby brother (ugh) haha the second one is different because that means Gee's got to put up with his obnoxious little brother how hates him lol :) Anyways, I hope you're happy for delaying my precious time for this! (who am i kidding I much rather be reading this amazing story than doing homework :}) Anyways, gotta go... Still can't wait until you start your mystery story!!! (dont wanna give too much away;;D)
Sowwies but Imma too tired to actually give you a decent comment, but may I say that I loved this and the whole Frikey friendship thing, is a great concept... Maybe if I remember in the mornig I'll give you a nice proper comment... Maybe?
alright first... since I'm commenting sooooooooo late I'm soooooo fuckign sorry!! At least this page is now letting me us it... but also, stop torturing Grey and update this shit XD haha okay anyhow, I love this chapter!! We finally get to meet Mikey "Well jokes on you, I don't have $10!!" haha ohhh Mikester XD I think it's hularious how Frank's like 'oh yeah I'm here to kidnap you and such' obviously not in those words because my ass is too lazy to actually be 100% on what everyone said because I'm fucking tired but I just want to give all the well deserving authors their comments (you being the top of the list since this comment is WAAAAAY overdue :P) Mikey is exactly how I picture him for this 'Mikey role' lol :3 but I do have to say that his mama is a bitch :P I will not miss her once Frank kidnaps him to Neverland XD haha I want more, like I told Grey, I'm like that book If You Give A Mouse A Cookie except it's If You Give Anita An Update (she will want more dammit) lol so get working on it;)
When I first read “Shadow! Where'd ya go mother fucker!?” I knew this was going to be an awesome story :D
“I don't actually own anyone, that's called slavery, and that's just too Southern.”
Pah, too funny!
I love how sassy Gerard is. How he stands with his hands on his hips and I don’t think Peter Pan, I think ‘uh-huh girlfriend’ lol.
I adored the flying scene, the fact I was just singing along. Any happy little thought? Oh Disney, how you’ve got me! And then Frank and Gerard’s totally gay snarky comments through the whole thing. It’s marvellous.
I love Lyn-z. The little Pixie with attitude! She has some hilarious little thoughts, doesn’t she? Like her butt problem. Ghetto butt, ha, damn! I hope perhaps there’s that moment from Hook where she gets all big and gets a kiss from Gerard (have you seen Hook, it’s fucking ace?).
“I'M STUPID? YOU'RE the one who suggested walking. . .over WATER! I'm not fucking Jesus, bitch.”
Oh my Bob, I think I laughed so hard I lost something important.
I love how there’s a constant run of ‘this is a story’ though out all their thoughts. I love just smashing down that fourth wall, lol. And all ‘this is foreshadowing’ larky. It’s genius!
Not to mention that the plot is epic! This is amazing! I demand more!
Frank shouldn't think vintage Transformers cartoons are something to be proud of, the big fucking kid, lol. And thanks for all the strange Batman/Robin shit I've got going through my head... the fuck, you've scarred me for life now!
“Wait, marbles aren't sharp. . .?"
I love Frankie, I do, I do, I do! He's so adorable, I want one! Bless him and losing his happy thoughts. Will he ever find a truly happy time?