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OHHH MYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!
My new favorite!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its so unique and i love the fuck out o this because i LOVE and ADORE PETER PAN <3

Much love and appreciation ^_^

also such a great approach to the story, seriously i LOVE this soooooo UPDATE sooooonnnn

or else I will COMMENT GRAPE YOU RIGHT IN THE MOUTH
p.s love degrassi and Claire is a dumb stupid bitch -___- who wouldn't love Eli??? broad/whore.......

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
loved it! <33333

I was laughing my ass off with the whole ‘rape’ convo, I mean like shaking trying not to scare the cats with my stupid freaking laughter…

Because of you, I now hate Mikey’s/Gerard’s mum, grrrrrrrr, evil woman.

“Now we can finally catch those pesky 'Three Musketeer' chocolate bars before they burn up in Earth's atmosphere!”
“Bitch please, I'm a vegetarian,”
“I WILL put you on a leash,”
“Nah, I just like going in and hanging out. . .makes me feel like a princess,”

I thought I loved your quotes before this, but this is an all new epic high… I mean really, I can’t stop chuckling or giggling or whatever I should call it.

Hisss eeew, Jersy Shore and Degrassi, you are not my friend, that’s just soooo wrong

P.S. Sorry it took me so long to put this up, I had a illion more sub updates.... that's what I get for loving to read.

This story is amazing!

This shit is fuckin amazing. I looooooooooooved it.
I cannot wait for the next chappies. I'm soooo excited. xD
Love ya
Ps. I watched J.S too and now I'm starting to talk like them. :,(

Hey- You know how you told me I could criticise this?...I'm finding it really hard to, because this shit is AWESOME.

Only thing is.. I agree with 'Beast in repose' who is a couple of dozen comments back- You have several spelling, grammar and tense issues that get in the way of this being as absolutely fabulous as it could be. I'm sure as a fellow pedant you'll agree that it's easy to get distracted from a plot if it has too many mistakes.

If you haven't already taken up somebody on their kind offer- I'll happily offer you my beta-ing services!

Looking forward to an update :) x

Do you remember the day u told me you were gonna write this?? u told me you'd been thinking about peter pan because you watched it with he who shall not be names *cough*ur brother*cough* a few days before. I was like what're u gonna call it and u were like 'whats one of the best mcr song ever? HAEDFIRST FOR HALOS!

Dude! this is like legit! update more often n i'll b ur best freind (;

Love this story<3

Yay update!!
You put the 'ASS' in 'SASS',”
HAHAHAHA!! that's cute:3 I love this story <3333

Fuck Yeeeeeeah. Page claim.

I fucking looooved it. It was very cute and Frankie learned to flyyyyy. Louis they had a lot of gay moments. LoL
Love ya

I'm one of the 32 subcribers!

i love it its really good honestly
like i said every thing u write is golden babe
next time dont over do it with the bass
dont want u to pass out :]

1. Your Amazing
2. You write epicly (think Lynz description)
3. See 1 and 2

FRANK CAN FLY, HE CAN FLY!!!:D To bad Gerard
doesnt know it's so he can kidnap his baby brother -_-
Oh shit, I hope I didn't just jinx myself or cause
any type of foreshadowing in the story! ahaha:)
This had to be the funniest thing ever! It causes
the reader to say 'Shit... foreshadow, or is it? o.O
hmmmm' I swear this thing gets cuter and cuter
with every chapter! Poor Lynz and her big ass, Gee
even had to point it out by patting it for some pixie
dust;) Lol, it's funny how both parties (Lynz and Frank)
think the other makes a beautiful noise, but so far...
I just see jealousness from Lynz... So far;D 'Now we
just sound gay' weeeeellllll, you needa sound gay lol
It's not a story if you dont sound gay;D All I can imagine
now as I watch Peter Pan is Peter being gay, or Gerard....
I even yelled out "Where the hell is Hook's son?!" as
I was watching it with my family they looked at me weird
and were like 'Hook doesnt have a son...' well you can
see how this started a bit of an arguement... "What are
you talking about?! Hook has to have a son. -enter confused
look- Peter and him fall in love and it's a romantic story
where neither one can have the other because it's forbidden!!!"
"Anita, that's a twisted version of Romeo and Juliet... Not a
disney movie for children. You need to go to bed and rest
your mind." So yeah very awkward night... Lol, but I was excited
to see an update:D And I was mentioned!!! Woo! ~CYBER
MUSKETEERS!!!!~ Ahaha, cant wait for more... no seriously...
I can NOT wait, -whisper- I'll go nuts! XD

xo
Anita:)

Alright so I'm going to evaluate each chapter
individual (this is the first time I've ever done
this because I thought this story deserved it:})
But as you read, I did each evaluation after i
read each chapter so if you're like "Duh, I explain
that in the next chapter" just know, I hadn't read
the next chapter yet. So yeah, enjoy this huge
comment because it'll defiantly be the longest
I've ever managed to write:)

Chapter 1:
He isn't what you would classify as, a 'normal'
father. He hunts down teenage boys in black skinny
jeans and red feathered hats for a living. I
freaken loved this part!!! I’m like busting up with laughter
and thinking ‘PEDOPHILE!!!’ ahaha! I loved how you
described the sun and moon, being sisters and just
taking turns watching over Neverland. It’s really
amazing how I can picture it, maybe because it’s Frank
who’s telling the story, but hey, who am I to tell him he’s
wrong;) I wanted to freaken cry in the end!!! But the last
sentence was the perfect ending! You’re amazing!:D

Chapter 2:
I love how Frank tries to make Gerard laugh even though
he wants to hate him:D “But you know what, hooks are
in fashion right now, especially the gold ones with those pretty
jewels on 'em, I love this line so much because yeah,
it had me laughing so damn hard! I shall adore you forever
for this line XD Stuipd, Stupid Gerard heehee you just gotta
him for his careless;) I thought Gerard was a little Pedophile
there for a moment;) What I don’t understand yet is why he
didn’t bring Mikey along I mean just curious… So the first
two chapters were background, that’s cool. I like that a lot so
you’re doing good, now on to read the next chapter:)

Chapter 3:
Hm not much except the fact that I hate Hook right now :/ I
mean, serious?! Using your only son to seek revenge on
your greatest enemy, who’s a pepper jack child!?!?! (love
how I threw in Frank’s cheese method;}) Why is Frank bleeding
profusely from his forehead?! Who in their right mind who do
that to their kid for something so stupid and accidental?! Alright,
I did love how Gerard was so trusting when hello, your enemy
wants to kill you so you thought it’d be brilliant to steal his son
right?! :P to you Gerard! So anyways, yeah I’m interested to see
how his plan goes, wonder what Mikey’s gonna do… And if
Frankie is 17, wonder how old Mikey is… Is he even considered
young enough anymore to go to neverland? How old was peter
pan anyways? Questions and more questions, I’m seriously going
to watch this movie once I’m done here. Which reminds me,
could I maybe steal your whole “Disney story idea” with maybe
with a twist?? Maybe I’ll do like Aladdin or Cinderella lol:) Just
thought I should check with the original master mind :D So
yeah, next chapter:D PS I love the Romeo and Juliet reference;)

Chapter 4:
“I don't know what a pedo-fail is. . .it just fit in the moment,”
ahahaha! I love this line too Matter of fact I love the whole
damn story:D Sooooo hmmmm I wonder what happened to
little Frankie… That bear skin must have been real killer :/ Poor
guy, but this is by far my favorite chapter, for a while when
Frank was basically raping Gerard I was like “Frank is totally
awake and this is part of his plan, what better way to get him to
trust you then rape him?” ahaha:D So yeah, you need to update,
I don’t care where you are!!!! Computer now and fast, chop
chop! I won’t wait forever you know -.- Okay yeah maybe I will,
but it doesn’t mean I WANT to wait forever. So yeah, answer
me on that who “Can I sorta still your idea”, just not the Peter
Pan part because that’s totally all you:D I’ll even send you a link
so you can check up on me and scold me when necessary
because you are AHMAZING!!! Heehee:D Way to go, I love you
and this storiy so update:D And also pressure you’re friend to
update her killjoy story;) hehee:D Mkay good bye for now!!!

xo
Anita:)

I love Peter pan! I enjoy frerards... So guess what this means?! THIS IS LIKE MY FAVORITE STORY!

First of all, you need to teach me how to write. Second of all, YESH!!!! Bass guitar! And third of all why the heck do you need 8 root canals Gee? That just sounds extremely painful.

Really thought you did amazing on this update honey pie!
It's late here, but well done sweety, I can't wait for the next installment!
<3
xxxx