Think Happy Thoughts - Comments

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I will be expecting more of this awesomeness!

Awww, god damn. I was getting into that. You have a few things you need to work on, such as grammar and spelling. Also I had to stop a few times to re-read what you had written because it was confusing. For example when Frank tells Gerard he's seen him flying around, Gerard says "what do you mean again" despite the fact Frank didn't even say "again", and Frank when he's talking to Hook he says "and you want me to kidnap a kid", hook then looks evil and says "I want you to kidnap him". you're sentences are misarranged in these two parts and makes it confusing to read, but apart from that it's all good :)

If you wanted someone to beta I would be more than happy to do it for you

nice loving gee as peter pan
love how frankie freaked out about the cover
update

Hilarious.
Sexy.
Perfect.

Please update as soon as you can!

I looooooved it. It was greeeeat. It had greeeat description and just perfect.
Love ya

i found this so funny and so cute

His face is very very white, almost like vanilla ice-cream. . .yummm. His hair's really pretty too, it's really dark, just like the night sky when the stars are hiding.

He was wearing really tight black jeans. His shirt was black and tight too, it was short sleeved and cut off at the end. His black boots were tall and shiny. Like I said, he was really pretty. If only girls could be this pretty.

keep writing ur good at it and if only girls were that preety then i would be full lesbian:Dlol

Love this :)

Soo you asked me to read your Frerard and I read the first chapter. I like it so far. Awww poor baby Fwankie and all the blood. Bad Gerard for scarring him! If you like Frerard's I just started one called the Angel and the Gambler and I need some concrit. My writing sort of fails and I'd love any feedback you can give me. Sorry for whoring my story out :(

You need to continue this...
I wrote a story like this too.. except, Frankie was the peter panish character and Gerard was a wendybird! :DD
(I<3starkidbtw)

loved it
<3

Total page claim..
xxx

OMG.
DUDE.
THAT'S LIKE THE BEGINNING OF MY COMMENT.
I DUNNO WTF HAPPENED TO THE REST OF IT.
I like had a fucking essay with italics in it and all sorts -angry face-
Basically I started with 'urrgh I love the plot twist this has taken it's purely genius'
then I had stuff like what the cheddar and stuff in italics about the humour in this and about how much I love it and then I also had description of frank's face in italics because I thought you described it beautifully AND DUDE I AM SO ANNOYED THAT MY COMMENT LIKE DISAPPEARED!?
Much love, I hope you weren't offended or anything, that looks awful up there!!!
xxx

Urggggh

Okay, I'm gonna steal your brain if you don't get up the next chapter pronto. Then I will build that robot that plankton had that he put spongebob's brain in, and put your's in it. I will then tell your brain to do nothing but type, so if you like your brain in your skull me thinks you should write faster. <3

P.S. To many epic moments to quote.

I like this story so far, wondering what will happen next.
More soon please?
<3

Hook is the one that is hurtin Frankie. He just want to turn him against Gee soooo he can have the treasure. But anywaaaay..... What would happen with Frankie ????
This is my new phrase..... "Great, this kid gave my hair a boner!"
Love ya

Aww. Poor Frank. Were they trying to make it realistic and knocked him on the head? Looks like he could have died. Is he pretending? But a head wound is hard to pretend floating in water where it washes blood away.

This story is fucking brilliant!!
I love it. I really do.
Please, update soon? =D

Well, isn't this fucking adorable? This is really amazing, and very very cute. I can imagine Gerard flying around all in black aha XD And when Ray's fro got in Gee's mouth, left me laughing my butt off! Man! You have to update! I love it:) I will be patiently awaiting for your next update aha :)

i love this storie
i love u<3