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  • JustUnRemember

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    Totally amazing. Period. Amazing. Epic. Etc, etc, etc. My hands might fall off if I try to type my compliments. Plus I'm to busy inducing a coma until you write the next one, so if you don't see me in school, now you know what to tell everyone. YOU NEED TO GET THAT THIRD CHAPTER DONE, OR SOMETHING BAD MIGHT HAPPEN TO MY BRAIN. (we all know that we don't want that happening, I think...)
    May 25th, 2011 at 11:14pm
  • musicaffair

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    this was one of the most interesting stories ive ever read! u have to write more!!! i loved how you used imagery so well u should definitley keep writing u got some talent!!! i love how the plot is developing soo far...

    p.s WRITE MORE I WANT NO SCRATCH THAT NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!
    May 22nd, 2011 at 07:10am
  • angy_something

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    WoW poor Gee and Frankieboy
    May 19th, 2011 at 04:40am
  • DryIce.

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    NNHHHHNNNNNGGGG
    THERE WERE SO MANY THINGS IN THAT UPDATE THAT MADE ME LAUGH.
    You have such good characterisation!! <3
    It's just beautiful!
    I'm sorry I couldn't copy and paste my favourite bits again in this comment. I should be revising -shifty eyes- pahaha. But tbf this update deserved my full attention.
    I just love love love love it!
    I can't wait for chapter 3! <3
    xxxx
    May 19th, 2011 at 12:04am
  • Annalia

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    "Trust me, a mouth full of Toro Hair is not delicious."

    Hahahaha.

    I like this story, your writing is funny.
    May 18th, 2011 at 10:31pm
  • All Time Low-Life

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    1) eeeep! i love this!
    2) Frankie's ADORIBLE
    3) where's chapter 2? adopted told me u finished and didnt put it up yet!
    May 15th, 2011 at 02:50pm
  • DryIce.

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    OMFG.
    I love the idea of this!
    No joke, the whole idea of this is just a stroke of genius. It has a fantastic plot line, I can't wait to see where you take it!
    Now your writing style! It's just BEAUTIFUL. Here are my favourite parts:

    But anyway. The truth is that the sun's too tired and has to sleep, so then it can wake up in the morning. And because the sun isn't selfish, she asks her little sister to help. So that's where the moon comes into this picture. The moon watches over us while her big sister goes off to bed, and the moon tries her best to keep the tides down and calm; however, she does slip up at times. For no beautiful creature is perfect. Yet, I still love the relationship I have with the sky.
    I loved this bit because, well it's just really unique, I've never read anything like it and I instantly fell in love. It's seriously gorgeous. I love your mind!

    “Do you work for Santa Claus?” I can't help it, I just really want to know. This is the type of gossip an eight year old pirate wants to know. I LOVE HUMOUR IN FICS. And can I just say, that actually made me lol at my screen for a while- it's so true. I was 8 when I found out Santa wasn't real. It was grim!

    I look up to the monster who did this. The tears run down my face but I can't care less. This beautiful angel is actually a demon in a Halloween costume That right there is just lush imagery. It really stood out to me and I was like GODDAMNIT THAT'S AMAZING!

    You are amazing, this story is amazing and if you don't keep it... I may actually die!
    More soon!
    <3
    xxxxx
    May 13th, 2011 at 09:16pm
  • frerardlover1

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    omg its blackasian that was ammmmmmmaaaazzzziiinnng
    i loved it you have to do another chapter for that i really wana know what happenes
    dont just leave me hangin
    love ya :D:D
    May 13th, 2011 at 02:24am
  • molly_makeout

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    I love this!! It's so awesome!
    How cute is little frank?
    Please write more soon :D
    May 12th, 2011 at 11:52am
  • Annalia

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    Wow, this is a really cool idea. I like it. A break from all the sameness. It's awesome, keep going, I want to see what happens next!
    May 12th, 2011 at 09:59am
  • Bandit-Chan

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    Mommy...this has to be one of the best fanfiction I've read..or maybe the best!
    Becuase it catches attention and I wanna know what happens.. :D
    I really really do like and I think you're amazing at writing. :)
    May 12th, 2011 at 05:46am
  • angy_something

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    Took your comment virginity YEEEEEAAAAHHHHH
    Anyway.... Ive never liked or read stuff about Peter Pan or any of that shit but this calls my attention and I like it. Keep going
    Love ya
    May 12th, 2011 at 04:05am