On the Outskirts of Manhattan - Comments

I really love the story i keep looking for updates but there never are any lol but i figure your just busy ^-^ anyways keep up the great work. i really love it

FINALLY!! The kiss!! The ice has been broken. Update soon please =)

Even when he was gone, he had left a little piece of himself with the woman to help her go on with life.
;_; Grey... :<

“Yes. I can make tofu for you baby..."
That just makes me chuckle. Hahaha. :3

“I apologize in advance for this,” he whispered, leaning closer and closer to her. “But I'm going to kiss you now,” he managed before his lips tentatively touched hers.

:U?!? EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!! :D!!! >.<!!!

loving this story even more.....can't wait to read more update as soon as you can :)

I love your story and can't wait to read more

I love this story!! I can see this becoming a trilogy. :) and it wouldn't drag the plot. :) sometimes trilogies just need to end. But this one could be successful. :)

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the story!! Keep up the awesome work!! :)

JamieJo:

YES!!! Finally her an Dawsone kissed, and it was so cute how he apologized in advance, it was exactly how I thought a guy like him would do it! Ahhhh! I'm so happy right now! I can not wait for the next update now! <3<3<3

Awe :) I love Dawson's super cute personality. I'm glad you see him the same way I do! :D

ParentalAdvisory:

I still love this story. It is one of my all time favorites. The only reason I ever get on MIbba is to read this story. :)

WHAT!?!?! That's INSANE! I feel sooooo honoured! Thank you! :)

Sunny-Lee <3

I still love this story. It is one of my all time favorites. The only reason I ever get on MIbba is to read this story. :)

YES!!! Finally her an Dawsone kissed, and it was so cute how he apologized in advance, it was exactly how I thought a guy like him would do it! Ahhhh! I'm so happy right now! I can not wait for the next update now! <3<3<3

MarriahShadows:

Damn.
Eight hours after reading and that's still the only thing I can say, just damn.
I had no idea that Dawson would make his move like that, not that I'm complaining. ;)

That's the shortest comment you have ever left me. lol.
Sunny-Lee <3

Damn.
Eight hours after reading and that's still the only thing I can say, just damn.
I had no idea that Dawson would make his move like that, not that I'm complaining. ;)

Cali's Mommy:

Sorry I didn't comment on the last chapter Sun,,,,,I probably read it on my phone and it's juat a pain to try to type comments from my phone. But that's really no excuse. As you know.....I LOVE this saga, from the first one to this one and would love to see a part 3!! :) I am glad they kissed....I've been waiting for that. Just reading it, I could feel the sexual tension between the two of them so I'm happy about the kiss. I mean, you can totally tell they like each other. And of course the fact that Nolan likes Dawson is going to go a long way with Ava, I think. I still can't decide about Ryder though, You know I addressed that in a previous comment, and if what I thought was correct, I don't know how he doesn't know who Ava is. But then again, maybe I was way off on that. Anyway, keep up the great work. We LUVS you girlie! Can't wait for the next update. In fact, I was about to comment on your profile page about an update. so this was a nice surprise! :D

No one's ever called me "Sun" before...probably because "Sunny" is the short form to "Sunny-Lee" Haha.

It's completely fine that you didn't comment last chapter. I kind of feel like a jerk for complaining about it. I got like 6 comments from it and now I feel bad for getting comments. Haha.

I'm glad you felt the sexual tension between Ava and Dawson. I thought it was obvious, but others thought she would get with Alex.
BUT, as you know. It can't be THAT easy between them. So expect some drama...later on ;P

Who said Ryder doesn't know who Ava is? He just doesn't know about her as a werewolf, which is to be expected, since Ava is very private. No one really knows about how she is a werewolf and what things happened to her then.

How handy that I updated only slightly before you asked :P

Sunny-Lee <3

Sorry I didn't comment on the last chapter Sun,,,,,I probably read it on my phone and it's juat a pain to try to type comments from my phone. But that's really no excuse. As you know.....I LOVE this saga, from the first one to this one and would love to see a part 3!! :) I am glad they kissed....I've been waiting for that. Just reading it, I could feel the sexual tension between the two of them so I'm happy about the kiss. I mean, you can totally tell they like each other. And of course the fact that Nolan likes Dawson is going to go a long way with Ava, I think. I still can't decide about Ryder though, You know I addressed that in a previous comment, and if what I thought was correct, I don't know how he doesn't know who Ava is. But then again, maybe I was way off on that. Anyway, keep up the great work. We LUVS you girlie! Can't wait for the next update. In fact, I was about to comment on your profile page about an update. so this was a nice surprise! :D

PSYCHOsickness:

I loved the latest chapter :D Cant wait to read more :D I really didnt expect her to go for Dawson though, I definately thought she and Alex would have hooked up...but I did see him making a move on her and a getting turned down. But I guess your just full of surprises so I'll expect the unexpected next time

I wrote chapter 1 before I decided that I wanted it to be part of this novel. So, of course, it is my favourite chapter because it was just to get a little writer's frustration out, and I feel like it turned out amazingly. Anyways, it is that chapter that really sets people up to think Ava and Alex are going to get together. I originally wanted to portray Alex as more of an asshole, but it was really hard...so, I'm going to do more of that when I revise this.

But yes...I pride myself in doing unexpected things....like killing off Grey. Tragic really. I'm actually a really mean author if you think about it :P

Sunny-Lee <3

I loved the latest chapter :D Cant wait to read more :D I really didnt expect her to go for Dawson though, I definately thought she and Alex would have hooked up...but I did see him making a move on her and a getting turned down. But I guess your just full of surprises so I'll expect the unexpected next time

livelaughloveSING566:

Yay Dawson and Ava!!!! And Ryder is so creepy and stalkery 0_0 and it was nice to see Ava still remembering Greyson, even as she begins to move on with Dawson. I loved it :)

:) Thaaaaannnkkksss! I have these moments where I'm like "God, Grey was the best ever. I miss him. I want him and I to be together....and then I remember he's a character. So, at the time that I was writing that, I was like "HOW COULD SHE?!?!" lol. I'm obsessed with my own character....dead character. But thanks :D

SilentlyEchoing:

I am dying waitin for chapters. I've been along the ride for most of the first book and now this one. I love the way you wrote and still write. You have amazing talent and don't forget.

Now on another hand. Eeeeeip they finally kissed. Onfgwtfbbqqqqqq minus the what the fuck there. It had to happen absolutely. He was such a pup (hehe the pun) for her. And I could never hate you! Just update or else I'll shank you!!

:D Thank you! I'm glad you like my writing style. I recently went over old work that I did, that I thought was brilliant at the time, and I noticed how far I've come in my writing. I mean, they were good ideas, and they were fairly well portrayed...I could just do so much better now.

Yes. They kissed. :)
I was like "wtf? What "what the fuck?"" Haha..but then I went back...because I didn't read past "Onfg" which is unfortunate, because the "wtf" came right after that.

Your use of "pup" was golden :)

I will update....at a later date. Because updating 2ce in a row would make people think I died and someone hacked my computer to post the pre-written chapters...then you'd all be upset because I'm not actually done writing the story....so you'd never know the end. Which would suck. :P

But seriously...thanks for not hating me :)

Sunny-Lee <3

I am dying waitin for chapters. I've been along the ride for most of the first book and now this one. I love the way you wrote and still write. You have amazing talent and don't forget.

Now on another hand. Eeeeeip they finally kissed. Onfgwtfbbqqqqqq minus the what the fuck there. It had to happen absolutely. He was such a pup (hehe the pun) for her. And I could never hate you! Just update or else I'll shank you!!

i just love this story and i cant wait to read more!!!
love anna

Yay Dawson and Ava!!!! And Ryder is so creepy and stalkery 0_0 and it was nice to see Ava still remembering Greyson, even as she begins to move on with Dawson. I loved it :)

In response to the last two chapters...

O_O ... OH MY GOD! They performed surgery on Ava?! SUPER WEREWOLF AVA to the rescue! :U

And to the car running thing... She got into the passenger's seat and scowled. “You shouldn't leave this thing running. It's so bad for the environment.” That is so YOU, Sunny. lol

Ryder just... O_O

Aww. I get the fuzzy feeling inside whenever I see Dawson and Ava together. lol Riley... meh. Haha. But Ryder... O_O EEEEEH. >_< I'm scared to see what will happen next.

More would be nice, but I can't ask for much... since we're both in the same position--however, you're in a better one since THIS is your SEQUEL. lol