Falling Out of Line - Comments

Aww I think about this story a lot! So glad to see an update. Its so sad though! Hopefully Naran and Lewis can patch things up. And maybe Tyler can figure things our and things will be happy again!

Hope all is well. And I definitely know how you feel with the whole art thing. I always find myself comparing my art with others, and a lot of times I don't like what I've done. But never give up and keep doing what you love!

please keep updating!!!!!

please keep updating!!!!!

Ah, I don't even care if it was short… that was amazing! Thank you thank you thank you!!!
Update soon!
I love this story!

I'm always eagerly waiting for an update!
I love love love this and so many emotions are running through me right now.
Can't wait for the next update!

It's so good! I'd left Mibba for a while, but I'm checking up on my favourite stories and let me tell you, I'm not disappointed. Keep up the good work!

This story really good.

OH MY GOLLY GOSH!
Aaaahhhh! You're teasing me so much with this!! Please update again! Xoxoxo

this story is amazing

Aw everyone's concerned about Tyler. I'm glad Lewis found him. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Loving this.

Ahhhh!!!!! I live for this story!! I literally waited for a year for it to be updated and it has! Resurrection complete! <3

I don't know why this story isn't showing up in my subscriptions any more, but I'm glad I checked my email. I was so glad to see this was updated! I'm always thinking about this story! This was a great but sad update and I hope that you'll be updating it again really soon.

I know you said this is a year late… but I really love this story.
Please tell me you'll be updating it again soon!!!
Can't wait. Xx

I'm reading and I want more!

I love this story :) I hope you're doing alright and all too.. <3 can't wait for the rest of this! :)

I love this story and you're an amazing writer <3

been away so this might be late, anyway this was amazing. i loved the exchanges between lewis and his sisters. it felt really real. so, yeah, this was great.

also it should be noted that cats are way better pets than bunnies, go cats!

I've really missed this story. I really love this chapter and I like how Lewis' family is a bit caring towards him. Can't wait for more.

Darling, you are extremely talented and so very beautiful. After reading the chapter, it was a little hard to believe that you were really going through all of that. But don't let anything life throws at you get you down. About your art, I bet it's awesome but your teachers are just too blind to see what masterpieces they are. And you write so well! I wish I was as talented as you. I wish that I could move people emotionally the way you do. In my opinion, your work should be published. (I hope one day it will be so more people can enjoy it.) Keep your chin up, darling, and look out for better days to come because you will survive all this bullshit and prove all who ever doubted you completely wrong. You are meant for greatness, my dear. Oh, and don't worry about the boys. They just don't know what they're missing. One day you will find someone, and he will be all you need. Those other guys won't even matter because you found the person who makes you so happy, way more than any other guy ever could. And if after reading all of that and you are still sad, always remember that I think you are beautiful, inside and out. ~Love, an adoring fan~

update please, it was a fucking awesoeme chapterr