Falling Out of Line - Comments

AHHHH!!!!! Tyler is subconsciously liking Lewis! *Hearts all over the place* even got jealous (without knowing it) at Kenneth! <3 Ohh myyy and poor thing it was broadcasted and Lewis cried :( *hugs Lewis*

AHHHH!!!!! Tyler is subconsciously liking Lewis! *Hearts all over the place* even got jealous (without knowing it) at Kenneth! <3 Ohh myyy and poor thing it was broadcasted and Lewis cried :( *hugs Lewis*

OHH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! For Updating :D I love this story so much!! okay let me read it now and ill comment later XD <3

i love this story so much!!

Ahh yes this is a good one. So there is some obvious jealousy going on with Naran and Lewis but the question is why? could Naran possibly like Lewis *gasp*
And this scene right here, gosh Tyler is such a difficult guy. I mean yeah i get that hes confused but he shouldnt be using poor Lewis like that. I love Sean and Cory btw. they remind me of the couple from The New Normal hahaha

HOLY SHIZNIPS! I FINALLY FOUND IT! Well, I wasn't exactly looking because I forgot that you were writing a sequel, but still! I'm just so excited and happy because you are one of the best freaking writers I've read on this site and in general, and I flipped when I realized that it was THAT story with Cory and Sean and stuff. I spazzed out and wanted to scream with joy. This story- no, your writing is going to be my new drug and I'm already addicted. There's so much drama and (at least for me) heart-wrenching emotions and sometimes I just want to explode it hurts so much it's overwhelming... Oh my God, I cannot describe with enough words how much I love reading reading this story... (I hope I don't sound like an overly-obsessed fan-dragon...)

Naran probably likes Lewis, or is just a jealous best friend, like me. And they should just own up to their feelings and kiss for real already. BAM>~~~~

I wonder if Naran likes Lewis?

This has been a wonderful update that i read <3 dont lose hope and think that your making your readers happy :D Thank you so much for updating :) I really like this story and the characters and everything <3 Good luck on the Novel Writing thing :) Keep Fighting! :D

update soon ! (:

Awww, someone is developing feelings for someone! Hehe, this chapter was really funny and cute. Well, when Tyler got to Lewis' house, because the beginning was a little sad. I feel bad for poor Tyler.

He totally actually is gay, or just likes Lewis. I am nervous for people to find out he's a foster kid with gay parents. Idky, but that's the stuff I always worry about.

Yay he's realizing he is gay! Or is just falling for Lewis he is quite the cutie an omg I love this <33 please update !!

@ eric halvorsen
I've met many Whovians at my university, so it's definitely been on my mind. It kind of fell into the story, but I do like that Lewis is one of us.

Omg his stomach! We all know what that means! He's becoming gay! Yay! I get so excited whenever this story is updated. I went back and read the prequel before I read this, and I love Sean and Cory. This new pairing thing is really unique. I love that he's pretending to be gay, but I feel like Sean and Cory are going to find out and be pissed that he's being 'disrespectful' or something to the gay community. Lewis, you poor adorable child. I think it's safe to say that he's one of my favorite characters ever.

I can't remember if i've commented on this before but anyway, I really love this story! Tyler and Lewis are both such great characters and so very cute.
Also, I love that Lewis is a Whovian :P

I can't wait for more it's really good so far and I know it's going to continue to be great.

So glad you finally updated this! Its starting to get super interesting ;)

Please update!! (: It'd be awesome if Tyler was gay...Him and Lewis would be cute (:

I love this story! I'm so glad that Cory and Sean ended up together forever <3 and Dallan is in it again!! I hope Tyler actually turns out to be gay. Poor Lewis.

I dunno why but I started reading this story one time and them stopped. I'm mad at myself because this is a great story. I finished reading all of it today, and I'm just so in love with this story. I feel so bad for Tyler but especially Lewis because Tyler's just using the poor boy. ): gah, I'm so glad I finally decided to read this.