Falling Out of Line - Comments

HAHAHA That chapter made me laugh a lot. I can't tell if that makes me insensitive or not...Yeah, but Tyler's 'friends' are assholes. Grrrr.

*fangirl* Yay. Dallan! Kiss! Next chapter please!~

YAY!!!! That was so cute! I really missed Dallan, he's so frickin awesome. Hmmmmm....what was with Tyler checking out Lewis? I loved that Tyler was naked when he met Dallan, that somewhat made my day. (Not in a weird perverted way, in a cute awesome way, I promise!) Tyler shouldn't use Lewis...gah he needs to become more people sensitive.
Cannot wait for the next update! :D

Hey, just wanted to say I love this story. I've been following since the prequel and you're an amazing writer! I recently just restumbled upon this in my subscription box and read it again. I really hope you get over your writer's block, I know how hard that can be :/

:DWho care's if it'
s a short chapter? It's an update!
He's only a little mean, just a tad.

Okay, just to say so, Tyler better turn out gay and get with Lewis or imma have to go on a rampage. Ya hear?
Anywho, good chapter, even if it was short!!!
Loves it!
Much love. Xoxo

that wedding scene was hilarious, and insane, and SO TOTALLY Sean and Cory. XD

also, Zephrinity needs to be in there somewhere. She's epic. XD (kinda reminds me of my sis, actually, teh crazy beech. XD) and she's the boys' best friend, she HAS to show up. XD

Page claim

So I love it and I want Dallan in the story anyway my friend (in real life) I im_not_okay(Sam) he had to delete his Mibba and is gonna make another cause he got hacked by this girl that was stalking him not even when he told her he was gay. But he's reading this off of mine and is going to make a Mibba again soon. Update soon.
Xoxo
Ema and Sam

xD

Wee Lewis! He so moody xD

So we finally get the (not so)fake gayness! and now it gets messy and dramatic ja? Sweet. Can't wait for more!

Reading this update?
BEST CHRISTMAS PRESENT EVER!
I love it so much :')
Omfg :')
You're perf.
Hope you had a lovely Christmas and I really can't wait for you to update :'D
<3

You don't understand how much I love this story omg
;ksjdflksjdflksjfs
Near screamed when I saw the update<3
Please update soon c:
Merry Christmas ^^

Best. Wedding. Ever.

That was hilarious xD What about Zephy? Do we get to see her too?
Nah, i'm just bugging you, i'll be happy with Dallan :D

Goat xD
...They should get a pet.
Lewis POV~

Yes it did please me xD and the goat was just.. a stroke of genius xD thank you lots :D

A goat... Haha

I miss Dallan and Keith! :( Please bring them back

I read all of Opposites Attract and all of Falling Out Of Line (so far) in less than a week. I feel guilty for not commenting on Opposites Attract but honestly, it was simply because I didn't want to stop reading to go to the comments page, I had to keep reading :) it was the best slash i've read so far, and I respect and admire your decision not to write sex scenes, I think there's a very distinct difference between slash and smut and I think you wrote a very tasteful and sweet slash and so far Falling Out Of Line is a perfect sequel. I love how its about Cory and Sean's son's life rather than theirs but you still get a really sweet insight into how their relationship has stood the test of time. You've managed to take two brilliant teenage characters and develop them into mature adults :) my favourite character is Cory I just love him xD my only request is a flashback to Sean and Cory's wedding :) thanks for making my week happy and almost getting me caught using my cell phone in class to read online xD
*end of long <love3 comment*

Another update so soon!! xD