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  • BarakatIero

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    I'm new to this, but it seems amazing C:
    That video<3
    Can't wait for more:)
    November 27th, 2011 at 10:13pm
  • Max Ryde

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    Okay :D
    November 27th, 2011 at 08:11am
  • GraceJones

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    Wait....so this is no longer a straight story? Does that mean that the Tyler x Lewis pairing will become a reality? ...That would be awesome >.<

    What are your plans noww?

    It was an awesome update! Can't wait for the next!
    November 27th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • Max Ryde

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    :D love this!
    Suggestions....maybe you should only write a few stories at a time and just write down the ideas for others until your stories have progressed more then start the new ones
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • GraceJones

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    Man! I sure do love your writing <3
    Although i'm not so good at suggestions....Something big should obviously happen at the party i just don't know what...Maybe we meet Robin?
    October 5th, 2011 at 08:11am
  • Emotional Havoc

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    I really like this story! So far Tyler is my favorite , he is awesome! This story is amazing so far! At first I had no idea how you were going to start it off. I thought you start with the typical adopting him as a baby and how he grow into a loving family blah blah blah. I really like the starting point you used more and boy this will be interesting ...
    September 15th, 2011 at 07:46am
  • EllaCarden

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    Update please
    August 22nd, 2011 at 04:41am
  • Max Ryde

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    Naran! :D
    Heh, the girls were creepy as fuck :D
    I loled already
    August 9th, 2011 at 01:27pm
  • celeste

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    ohh making friends already..
    i like Lewis and Tyler...though im not sure why yet..
    cant wait for more!
    August 9th, 2011 at 06:22am
  • GraceJones

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    Tyler and Naran are my favourite characters so far :D
    Awesome update, that is a big school! and my favourite line in that whole story:

    Creepy as fuck xD
    August 8th, 2011 at 08:42am
  • Fading-Away

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    I just realized... Now, I know this is gonna sound really pig-headed and narcissistic, but, was the idea for this sequel given by myself in "Opposites Attract", like... When I offered it as a name when you wanted to change it, before it became opposites attract?
    Yeah... Just wondering...
    August 7th, 2011 at 03:42pm
  • pulling teeth

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    Is this going to end up a slash? Or is this just him faking it?
    I'm confused. Lol.

    Anyways, it has a good start. :)
    I'm curious to see how this will unfold.
    August 7th, 2011 at 02:46pm
  • celeste

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    yay! update...
    ohhh can't wait for more!
    August 6th, 2011 at 03:26am
  • GraceJones

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    How i love your writing! Now have a cookie :3
    And update :D
    August 3rd, 2011 at 01:56pm
  • Max Ryde

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    XD COOOL!!!! short? That chapter was NOT short! but it was awesome :]
    August 2nd, 2011 at 12:43pm
  • lilladybug26

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    yes! They got married! Now u need to update soon!
    July 17th, 2011 at 06:15am
  • Fading-Away

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    Okay, I realise I'm totally late with this comment, sorry!
    I LOVE it already, update soooooooooon! PLEASE!
    July 14th, 2011 at 09:42am
  • Max Ryde

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    AWESOME!!!^^
    July 8th, 2011 at 05:59am
  • celeste

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    this seems very interesting..
    subscribing now!
    July 5th, 2011 at 11:43pm
  • Syny

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    Awesome chapter, a great start to a new story c:
    They got married, that's wonderful c:
    They honestly sound like a women/man couple. Just saying'
    Tyler seems pretty cool.

    This will be interesting.

    Update soon?
    July 5th, 2011 at 01:29pm
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