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  • TropicalStormHawaii

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    YESSSS HE FINALLY REALIZES HIS FEELNGS <3 :D
    May 1st, 2013 at 07:57pm
  • Fading-Away

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    I loved the chapter!!!! You're wrong, it was a good one.
    Can't wait for the next one! :D
    May 1st, 2013 at 04:21pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    HE'S IN LOVE WITH HIM! Finally he realizes it. Dummy.
    May 1st, 2013 at 06:54am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    I'd been hoping for this :) I'm so glad that they found Lewis and he's okay. :) I hope he and Tyler talk and work everything out soon.
    Also, I hope life starts to get better for you. Thanks for writing. :)
    April 30th, 2013 at 10:51pm
  • yurio

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    I didn't think this chapter was crappy. I really like it and I'm glad you updated. I've been thinking about this story. (: This chapter had me crying so much, but I'm glad Lewis will be okay and I hope that Tyler can help him get better.
    April 30th, 2013 at 08:29pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    Tyler is being a dickwad
    April 1st, 2013 at 02:58pm
  • xXHaleyHeartbreakXx

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    I just started reading this and now I'm addicted! Please update soon.I have to know what will happens with Lewis.
    April 1st, 2013 at 02:53am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    OMG! Lewis!!! Nooooo!!!

    Of course I'm not mad! I'm just excited that you updated :)
    April 1st, 2013 at 01:03am
  • Nicole_789

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    I'm so glad you updated!!!! It's been months I'm so happy Cool
    March 31st, 2013 at 01:46pm
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    Jacob is an interesting character... It's hard to explain, but it's like he's occasionally dropping in to make sure everything goes the way it's supposed to...

    Anyway, I hope to read more soon!!
    February 25th, 2013 at 07:02am
  • NothinNNomore

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    Why is he so dumb?
    January 30th, 2013 at 06:09am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    Oh noes D:
    January 29th, 2013 at 11:20pm
  • Nicole_789

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    I want Tyler to confess his love
    January 28th, 2013 at 06:43pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    He better not fucking dump Lewis. I'll kill him.
    January 28th, 2013 at 07:15am
  • onedirectionshipper

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    yayyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU JUST ADDED TO MY PERFECT NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 28th, 2013 at 06:30am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    Oh my gosh, that's so embarrassing! D: Poor Lewis! Please update; I must know what happens next!
    January 22nd, 2013 at 07:30am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    Update soooon! :( I need to know what happens to my baby Lewis.
    December 25th, 2012 at 04:47am
  • onedirectionshipper

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    ahh!!!!! i loved this chapter so much! and i love anime!!
    December 10th, 2012 at 12:07am
  • NothinNNomore

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    What a dickface! I hate Kennith The Tour Guide. And poor Lewis!
    December 9th, 2012 at 11:23pm
  • Moulin

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    Ohh god what a jerk XD
    I absolutely love this story, ive been waiting for you to update and i am not disappointed that was hilarious. Ugh I love poor lewis, i would so be his best friend :)
    December 9th, 2012 at 08:23pm