The Quiet - Comments

Hmm... I'm thinking Clay might have some issues later on...
I'm wondering if Lena's going to cause more trouble or if she's going to back off. Somehow, I think she's more likely to cause more trouble.
I'm a bit concerned for Cari since she's unsure about leaving with him, but she'll probably be fine.

I finally caught up with it! I'm sorry for the lack of comments from me and ish. :(

But I really really like the update, and the chapter beforehand. You can tell gradually that Clay is becoming more and more worked up by all the crap going on in his life and it's gonna be the death of him.

I really like how the chapters are on the shorter side, but seem to tell more than a long chapter would. If that makes sense. :) It gets a point across each time, without overdoing it and just becoming a bunch of rambles / nonsense.

But seriously, I really do like this story. I feel like I'm reading an actual book.

I think Lena is evil and going to kill everyone.
Just sayin'

<3

I'm thinking Cari might try to take things into her own hands, despite Clay's protests. And, Lena... just when I think she's gone for awhile, she returns. I'm hoping that if things go bad with Cari & Lena, that Cari will be able to protect herself.

I hate liam for giving my favorite character an ugly bruise..

Lena sounds like a joy. I'm slightly afraid for Clay as it has a potential to move to obsessive-stalker territory. As for Liam, he sounds like a jerk. I hope that Clay will stand up to him if he tries to beat him up again.

Lena sounds...Charming...

Wow, I missed a lot of updates. >.<

Cari and Clay's relationship seems to be moving along quickly, but not too quickly which is good. The cat's-eye pendant adds so intrigue to the story , as well as Clay's ex-girlfriend, moving it to the mysterious side a little. It was nice to see Clay stand up to Liam, as I was expecting him to get beat up again. I'm very curious about that pendant Clay has, and hope to see more of it being involved with the two of them.

Ooooh things are about to get interesting..!

Gah stupid cliff hangers..! Who was that..?! I need to know update please :)

Short but that doesn't take away from the awesomeness..update soon :)

Well, well, well Amy. You've written something straight out of a teenage slasher movie. And I absolutely adore it. The first chapter was just really cute, but the ending really made me question Clay. He gives me a creeper vibe. His story didn't help that feeling much, either. I don't know, this whole thing gave me the heeby jeebies. Which is what I look for within stories like this. I really, really liked this, woman. AND I DEMAND YOU UPDATE. Yes, I used the demand word. I did. It's just quite lovely and appealing. <33

Okay I'm not one for giving out great constructive criticism so I am just going to say: this is really good so far I wanna read more! :D

Omg I love this story I need another update pretty please :)

whoa i love this please update soon so good

Whoa O_O The cat's eye thing was pretty awesome.

That was awesome..! Definitely my favorite chapter thus far..! This is awesome :) just update please..!

This is crazy! I really, really like this update <3

This is actually amazing.

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