October 13th, 2011 at 02:02am
The Quiet - Comments
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whose the creep on the phone?October 12th, 2011 at 03:42pm
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Whoa... The weird caller knows both of them? O.o
Death threats... This makes me really want to know who the caller is, and I agree with them, I doubt it's Lena. She may be a little... unstable, but I don't think she's that unstable.October 12th, 2011 at 05:15am -
Cari is taking this real well XD I would be barricaded in a closet if I were in her position.
This is getting more intense, and I'm loving it :D
Update soon, pretty please!October 12th, 2011 at 04:37am -
O_o that's so fucking creepy. I love it.October 12th, 2011 at 04:12am
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Oh dear.. I wonder who's callling?
Good choice on Clay's part, not going out to try and fix his car. He probably wouldn't be able to see well enough to fix it anyway.October 11th, 2011 at 02:32pm -
What I really like about your stories is the simplicity if it all. There's no guessing around, it's very to the point. Another thing is their banter is quite refreshing to read.
Chapter 16October 11th, 2011 at 05:13am -
O_O I wonder who's calling her...October 11th, 2011 at 05:05am
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Oh dear, a huge scary house and his car going dead? It just isn't Clay's night, is it?
I'm curious as to what will happen next, since you said everything's about to come crashing down...October 10th, 2011 at 03:49pm -
oohh he's gonna stay with her isn't he? i can't wait for the update :)October 10th, 2011 at 03:34pm
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Uh oh, whats going to happen? Dun dun dun dunnnOctober 9th, 2011 at 07:03pm
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Weird compliment, but I always like the chapter titles. :) Especially this one; "Twisted." It gives you only a slight idea of what may happen.
Loved the update. :DOctober 8th, 2011 at 09:44pm -
This story is all over the place and I think I like itOctober 6th, 2011 at 02:44am
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Lena? Befirend Lena? Dosen't Clay realize that Cari trying to befriend Lena would be a person trying to hug a jellyfish? If Cari tries, I think someone's going to get it hurt and it'll probably be Cari. Also, Lena would probably be suspicious of Cari's behavior as she(Lena) seems to think of Clay as her's.October 5th, 2011 at 12:15am
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Stupid Clay >_< he's got a lot of nerve at the moment.October 4th, 2011 at 09:12pm
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awesome chapter but i wanna know what the favor was! update soon pleases :)October 4th, 2011 at 02:46pm
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Tsk tsk tsk, Cari, lying is bad.October 3rd, 2011 at 02:15am
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A favor? Hm... I wonder what it he'd need help with...
Honestly, Lena needs to give up. If she'd come after him, even after he leaves, I'd say she has a bit of an obsession. I love that you brought up the cat's eye necklace again, it interests me quite a bit.October 3rd, 2011 at 01:41am -
I like how eerie the update was. I was actually wondering at first if Clay was kidnapping her, lol.
And I like the pace it's going at :) it's not too slow to the point where it's dragging, but it's not overwhelmingly dramatic, either.October 2nd, 2011 at 11:52pm -
HEY!! apologies for no comment the past couple of updates but now i am back and that was freaking intense...she shouldn't have slapped him when she was the one being the whore! plus i wonder where they're going..you're really building the suspense i can't wait to find out if Clay loses it and goes off on Liam!October 1st, 2011 at 12:19am
Right when I was at "just start crying" the phone rang, creepy