September 30th, 2011 at 02:11am
I finally caught up with it! I'm sorry for the lack of comments from me and ish. :(
But I really really like the update, and the chapter beforehand. You can tell gradually that Clay is becoming more and more worked up by all the crap going on in his life and it's gonna be the death of him.
I really like how the chapters are on the shorter side, but seem to tell more than a long chapter would. If that makes sense. :) It gets a point across each time, without overdoing it and just becoming a bunch of rambles / nonsense.
But seriously, I really do like this story. I feel like I'm reading an actual book.
I'm wondering if Lena's going to cause more trouble or if she's going to back off. Somehow, I think she's more likely to cause more trouble.
I'm a bit concerned for Cari since she's unsure about leaving with him, but she'll probably be fine.