August 30th, 2011 at 06:51pm
He would even commit murder for her...
That's either REALLY romantic, or REALLY concerning. But either way it's cool :) Great update.
The Quiet - Comments
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August 30th, 2011 at 07:46am
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I loved this..I NEED more..! I love the way you write :)August 29th, 2011 at 01:47pm
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Clay's story is creepyyy! Really well written though :)August 29th, 2011 at 06:29am
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This seems like it'll be an awesome story! I like it a lot so far :) subscribing <3August 27th, 2011 at 10:42pm
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Oh I'm so glad you updated this and I love clay..! He is ca-ute..! I can't wait to read the next chapter..!August 26th, 2011 at 12:45am
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Aw, that's kind've cute how she and Clay met. Carl's backstory is interesting, with her dad being a lawyer and all. I wonder what's going to happen to her?August 25th, 2011 at 11:56pm
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I like this so far :) I'm curious to see where it is going to go.August 16th, 2011 at 10:52am
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I absolutely love the little summary on you stories page. It has a good hook to it that draws the readers attention. The first chapter was a nice start, giving reader's a introduction to some of the characters. To be honest, I'm a little worried about the and girl and this Clay guy. Clay seems rather scary right of the bat....
This is very good so far and I hope to see more for it. :)August 15th, 2011 at 03:53pm -
Has the potential to be dark and scary..I want more..!August 15th, 2011 at 06:09am
Well, at least it shows he cares.
As always, I'm amazed annd enthralled by your writing. I wonder what exactly Clay will end up doing (other than murder) in order to protect/save her and what it is he'd be protecting or saving her from.