The Quiet - Comments

this guy is deranged....seriously who is he?

"Came back."

Holy sh!t! I smell a zombie!

Awhh, Lena does care :D

Yay for Lena's change of heart. :) The suspense is amazing at the end of this update, I'm quite concerned for each of the characters and wondering if they'll manage to escape or get out alive, who will be lost, and what will happen to the psychopath as well as the psychopath's identity. I look forward to your next update.

Ahhhh yes! We've got to the good parts! Though I do wish there was more of a running from the psychopath parts hut nevertheless, this is good

D: so fucking creepy. But I love it; especially the last few updates. <33

they should've known that he was listening.....what happens next please?

I'm going to suppress all thoughts that the psychopath sounds kind of cute...

Update soon! I'm wondering how they're going to get out of this one O_O

O.O

Now that they have no way out, I wonder what they'll do next. Split up or is Lena going to suggest giving Cari to the psychopath again?

Finally caught up!

I'm weirdly excited to find out who the psycho is, considering you're always really creative with that sort of thing. It's getting freakier and freakier, and I even felt a little sorry for Lena there at the end.

RULE ONE: DON'T SPLIT UP.

Update soon, please :)

So, I kinda wish I didn't catch up on the last few chapters right before I planned to go to bed... I just read "Crash" and when I saw the title of it, I thought Lena would've gotten in a car crash. But, no. Sadly mistaken, loll. Very creepy and suspenseful. I'm loving it. :)

If Lena's hinting at what I think she is, then she shoul probably keep it to herself. Seriouly curious as to who or what is in the house with them. :)

gah those cliff hangers get me everytime!!!! please update soon :(

Oh my goodness please update?! :)

wtf?! if she hates her guts then why is she coming over?! she's crazy isn't she....something is gonna go down in that house i know it!!!! can't wait for the next update XD

I wonder if Lena's going to make it to Cari's or if something's going to happen to her? It was odd really, Lena talking somewhat nicely to Cari.

This is getting really creepy
Like I don't want to know what will happen to then but then again I do

The layout is cool, simple and easy to read, I love dark layouts and this fits to this story. The summary is really good to it definitely makes you wonder what's going to happen same with the second and first chapter. :)

Oh dear, things seem to be getting worse for Cari and Clay as the story moves on.

This is weird, and I'm not even sure I should be admitting this in public but: My eyes started tearing up reading this, it seriously creeped me out and that's not an easy thing to do.

GREAT JOB, CLAY! Bring up a murder. Awesome, that's sure to cool her down.

"she was taking things well. If it were me, I would have barricaded myself in a closet somewhere."
:D

I could imagine then sitting in a livingroom hearing the news report wayyy to clearly in my head and just AHH that's so creepy!

I probably would barricade myself in like my bathroom holding my pepperspray in one hand and in the other a kitchen knife, daring that sonuvabitch to come at me