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  • Painted Bones.

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    I hope Maddox kills him... that would be so perfect. And then he serves some time in the big house for what he's done and then get's out to find Clay and Cari married and they all keep in touch. And Lena is alive again.
    December 1st, 2011 at 05:40am
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    Poor Clay... I wonder if he'll manage to live through this or if he died/was already dead when Alec threw him through the window. I really hope that if Maddox does die, which I hope doesn't happen, he'll at least die for a cause. I refuse to believe that he deserved what's happened to him as he said himself, he didn't want to hurt his lover; it was accident in a fit of rage. If he had done what he did with the intention of hurting Ethan, then my view on him may have been different. I honsetly hope that Maddox is alright and manages to kill Alec or that Cari somehow gains the strength to get up and fight despite her current state.
    November 30th, 2011 at 10:24pm
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    My reaction thrroughtout chapter 39, open mouthed shock
    Chapter 40 - what the hell! He killed him!!!
    November 30th, 2011 at 07:59am
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    Lena's dead, Cari's knocked out, Clay's in immense pain, and now Maddox is missing. I suppose I should be worried, but I'm actually quite happy that Maddox is missing as it means complications for Alec. I can't believe Alec killed Clay's dad. Hopefully Clay will get revenge/avenge his father's death...
    November 28th, 2011 at 12:23am
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    RUN MADDOX, RUN!
    November 27th, 2011 at 11:04pm
  • Oceanid.

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    So Alec is also one of those people who have no real backbone and instead of going for their true opponent, shoot some poor person involved. Real classy Alec. I'm concerned for Maddox, Clay, and Cari now...
    November 27th, 2011 at 04:37pm
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    Oh my god. He didn't even hesitate! He just shot her! Poor Lena D:

    That was very well-written, though.
    November 27th, 2011 at 03:30am
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    I'll probably cry a little when/if Maddox dies >_>

    Holy crap, Alec! The suspense...
    November 24th, 2011 at 02:45am
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    I like that Maddox is concerned for them now and that he made a comment on how quickly their views of him changed. I hope Cari won't do anything life-threatening... I understand that she doesn't want anything to happen to Clay or Lena, but I don't want her to be hurt or get killed while trying to protect them. I also want to know who's coming in through the window. I want to think it's Alec because he seems like someone who'd say they were coming and really have been watching from outside almost the entire time, however it's probably someone else.
    November 24th, 2011 at 02:25am
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    This is extremely interesting! I only got to two chapters, but it is very dark and I love where it's going.
    November 23rd, 2011 at 04:58pm
  • Wanderlust.

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    I feel bad for him :/
    What does the photo have to do with the layout?
    Oh yes! we get to find out who this twister motherchucker is!
    November 23rd, 2011 at 10:06am
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    I feel bad for Maddox, even after what he did. I'm guessing Alec is the kill without remorse or any feelings type, but of course I'll have to wait and see. While I look forward to Alec's eventual appearance, I dread it at the same time as I worry about what will happen to everyone else once he appears.
    November 23rd, 2011 at 03:24am
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    Awwwh, somebody needs a hug :( I hope Alec doesn't actually kill him...
    November 23rd, 2011 at 03:17am
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    Aw, Maddox... :(
    I seriously hope something bad happens to Alec when he finally reveals himself for involving some poor guy who did something they didn't intened to do and most likely only went along with Alec out of fear.
    November 19th, 2011 at 11:56pm
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    Maybe Maddox isn't so bad after all... Is Alec going to reveal himself soon?
    November 15th, 2011 at 08:07pm
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    I CAN'T BELIEVE CLAY DID THAT. :O OH MY GOD.

    I know I've said this before, but I like the titles. They're so simple but are so perfect for the chapters.

    The scene in 30 / 31 where Cari's just staring at Clay freaked me the fuck out! I could picture it and it's just so disturbing. Really well written
    November 14th, 2011 at 09:01pm
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    What's with the plot twist??
    It's okay but just whoa, very whiplash like there
    November 13th, 2011 at 06:48am
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    Crap o_o

    But yay for Latin! :D
    November 12th, 2011 at 08:20am
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    Did Clay or one of Clay's ancestors do something horrible?
    November 12th, 2011 at 05:18am
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    Wow, full of surprises! I'm glad Lena's alive!
    November 9th, 2011 at 10:01pm
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