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  • Oceanid.

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    O.o Lena's alive?
    Holy cow, complete and utter surprises in this chapter. So Maddox isn't doing this of his own will, per say. I feel a little bad for him, getting caught up in something that he wanted no part in, although that guy probably has some serious dirt on him to get him to do this. Now, this Alec Traven person, I want to know more about. Why does he want Cari dead and how is Clay involved?
    November 9th, 2011 at 08:52pm
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    :( I'm starting to feel bad for Maddox...Again. I mean he's an evil little fnck, but he's still sad...
    November 9th, 2011 at 08:15am
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    Oh no...
    I'm starting to feel like there's going to be another death, that isn't Maddox's. How did he find Clay? Does this guy have eyes in the back of his head or something?
    November 7th, 2011 at 02:07pm
  • Antagonist

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    Wow!! Love the updates, and it's getting brutal! Can't wait to find out what happens!
    November 7th, 2011 at 11:48am
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    :O

    Nuh-Uh. Nuh-Uh! Her face!

    Update soon, please :)
    November 7th, 2011 at 08:38am
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    Ah, apologies :( I'm a little behind.

    So....

    OH MY GOD, CLAY KILLED LENA? D: Oh goodness. Poor Lena, and poor Clay.
    November 5th, 2011 at 05:05am
  • Oceanid.

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    Boring? I don't think so.
    I feel bad for Clay, as I can't imagine what he's feeling after what he had to do to Lena and after trying to save Cari and failing. Hopefully Clay will be able to help her, if not save her then at least avenge her. However, I'll just have to keep reading to find out. Your writing is brilliant, as always. :)
    November 5th, 2011 at 04:54am
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    Poor Lena.. :(
    I wonder what the psycho's next move will be since Clay did what he wanted?
    November 3rd, 2011 at 09:45pm
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    I just finished it and I demand more!!!

    It seriously had me hanging off of every word, and the whole read I didn't know what to expect.

    I am suscribing and going to read more of your stories.
    October 30th, 2011 at 08:32am
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    What the fuuuuuuck is this ish D: so messed up, but so interesting. omg. <3
    October 30th, 2011 at 05:02am
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    O_O

    Thanks for killing my soul there.
    He's not going to kill Lena...Right? RIGHT?

    I feel a teeny tiny bit sorry for Maddox now, but he needs to chill out and let them go...Perhaps work this crap out in therapy.
    October 29th, 2011 at 11:24pm
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    O.O Whoa... I can understand being upset because of being jailed for a crime he didn't commit, but geez, if they tried their hardest to help you, why decide to ruin their life?
    And of my gosh, Clay don't kill Lena!
    October 29th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • Oceanid.

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    D: I hope Clay isn't dead...
    I like that Cari and Lena are working together now and that Lena seems to be over her jealously issues. I just hope that if Clay does turn out to be truly dead, that Lena won't turn on Cari because of it. Also, I Really want to know what this guy's issue with Cari is if it's more than a psycho thing. I'd also like to know the psycho's identity, but that's just wishful thinking on my part. I can't wait to
    October 28th, 2011 at 07:24pm
  • skhslghsssalj

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    >:o Clay better not be dead! He's my favorite!
    October 28th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! why would you kill Clay? He was my fave :'(
    October 28th, 2011 at 04:05pm
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    Originally I was like as fack he died but then I read your commenthingy at the end and now I'm not so sure
    October 28th, 2011 at 08:55am
  • Painted Bones.

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    I CALL YOUR BLUFF!

    Clay can't be dead D: Nooooo
    October 28th, 2011 at 06:02am
  • skhslghsssalj

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    Sorry for the delayed comment / read, but I love love love love love the past two updates <33
    October 26th, 2011 at 03:31am
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    “We can walk around the fire,” XD I laughed.

    This was a really good chapter :) I'm super curious to see what happens next, and if Clay makes it.
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • Wanderlust.

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    WHO IS HE
    Ahhhhhhh
    October 23rd, 2011 at 08:30pm
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