Innocence for Days - Comments

BROOOOOOOOO its been like 7 years since an update or something, you probably aren't even logged into this account anymore.This makes me so sad, I'll probably never know where you went :(( and I'll also never know what was in the envelope either, ugh. If you ever see this though...your writing is so freakin' good, this and the prequal are amazing. I haven't had a book make me really cry in a long time other than the prequal. I hope someday you'll come back, even just to post an update on how you've been!!

Virtual pie is my favorite. So Cassie's back and her parents are separating. That would be a depressing "welcome home" present.

CLAIRE! You'd better tell the truth or I'll...or I'll...there I go, talking to story characters again. I certainly hope that Claire spills the beans, but then again Scarlet might do something stupid and...ugh...THIS IS SO GOOD...so good dudette...so good!

Lies, lies, lies! So many lies! :< *Flail.* It won't go down so well when, or if ever, Scarlet finds out about what really happened to Claire and that it wasn't her kidney that caused her to be in the hospital. I understand a little why Claire would keep it from her because she doesn't want to end the year and start the new year on a bad note, but that can be overlooked... Just a little bit though, it's too sad what happened to her... And it's not like Scarlet would be stupid enough and find that bastard, unless she's looking for a death wish... For all she knows, he's in jail, and when she finds out...

EXPLOSION! <-- That's what's gonna happen to Johan... Following Oreo's explosion, and the rest of the band... and soon the world... O_O

Ahhh! I don't want her to find out ever! But she needs to because what happens if she runs into the fucker when she goes out grocery shopping or something... x_x Good thing she has those mini ninja guards from Gerard's envelope to protect her!

Things certainly will not go down well if Bill gets to be the one to tell Johan of the lies she's been fed. Maybe that'll be enough to send her away to America... >.> Oh Claire, don't be a liar and tell her the truth already, damn you! I don't like severed family ties because Claire cares for Scarlet and yeah... She probably already lost Bill... And then maybe down along the road, she'll lose Gary AND Harry and she'll be all alone... Forever alone.... *Insert Forever Alone meme here...* xD

I definitely think Bill would tell Scarlet and risk his and Claire's friendship forever because he's the only one of the three guys whose name doesn't rhyme! It's always the one whose name doesn't rhyme with the others! You can't trust the non-rhymers in a group of members whose names that rhyme! ... Maybe...

Yay! I love virtual cookies and skittles! They're divine as much as this story! : D

I LOVE SKITTLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But there is still a mystery to be solved...what is in the envelope Gee gave her? Maybe its a polar bear! I thought Claire would have learned her lesson about hiding things from Scarlet...You know what would be awesome?! (Besides Michael Way in my bed) The guys and Andrew should have a showdown but it should be like the gun battle at the end of the NANANANANANA music video. That would be EPIC.

Nuuuuuu, Johan! Not safe in England without Oreo and the guys! :( Sad, not fun times I predict ahead. No gusta! No gusta at all! There better be a bazillion mini ninja guards to protect her in that envelope lazy Gerard gave her... >.> Why so lazy Gerard? xD I kid.

Awww. She hid the sleeve thingy in his room so he can find it and when he does, he'll think of her and all that is mushy gushy things of romantical-ness! Now I must know what's in there as well. Why are there so many secrets in envelopes and sleeves!? So many secrets! xD Hopefully he doesn't find it a months later or when something bad happens 'cause he'll probably end up destroying it out of anger. Anything can happen, hey. No gusta angry Oreo as well as a sad one. :(

That "Jo-han-me-that-grenade" nickname is pretty clever if I must say. Love it. x3 <3

I totally wouldn't mind Mikey teaching me the bass line of Helena and Gee singing along. I like Frank's new nickname: "jo-han-me-that-grenage".

Amazing chapters Lyzsi *applauds* Yay! It sucks that Scarlet has to go home, and oh my god, when she finds out what happened to Claire...

Ack! Suspense! I love it!

*Dances the update dance with a crazy cat on acid and an ent*

I MISSED A CHAPTER! STUPID COMPUTER *showers Lyzsi in apology hugs* Going to go read them both now, I know they'll be great :)

Visa papers?!?!? That made me vomit a rainbow (and a unicorn). Now, I'm really tired, because Frank and Scarlet went to bed, now I want to go to bed (preferably with a certain Michael Way).

Must. Know. What's. In. Envelope. Now! Curse you Gerard for being all "But you can only open it when you get home blah blah blah! Because I'm a Party Pooper like that!" >.>

And yay Oreo! Visa papers, whoo! Hopefully Johan stays with Oreo because they're so cute and lovely! I feel torn... Johan needs to go back home because of what happened to Claire and be her support, even though she doesn't know yet... So not safe for her there, for the both of them since that loon is on the loose! How dare they let him out of jail! >.< Johan needs to be with Frankie 'cause it's safer that way. I would die if anything worse happens to Johan because then Frank would be sad and no one wants a sad Oreo! Sad Oreo's are just sad and probably don't taste good! Eh... Claire has Gary, Bill, and Harry there for her... Yeah... They can protect her, yeah!

Can't wait for the next update! :D I wanna know what's in that envelope that is size A4 and is brown and is written on with red and black marker and has secrets inside that I wanna knows about!

I can totally see Frank being really violent when opening his presents.

Seems like Scarlet had an awesome Christmas!
Frank and Scarlet's little pecks and kisses are so cute :)
Update soon?

I log on to find that this has been updated...I go back a chapter to remind myself of the story line and what do I find...actually there are 2 new chapters!! Happy days! :) Good to have you back missy! Was wondering if you were okay, writers block must have really got to you :P great chapters and more misery for us? Really :( grrr I shall be having words with you Lyzsi if this ends badly for Scarlet! :P x

I'm so glad that you're back!
And holy fuck, Andrew was released?! Something bad will happen, right? D:

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oH MIKEY FRANKING RAY GEE! That wasffjdkgnajsjkfjah;;.

ANDREW NEEDS TO DIE! NOW! LIKE RIGHT NOW! AHHH!

Amazing chap, incredible writing once more. Gtg, power blackout due.

*revitalises update dance*

HOLY FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay...I feel better now. But, let me just say again...
HOLY FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope Andrew dies...painfully...*evil laugh*

To begin with I'm just gonna say whoa-my-god where have you been???!? It's been SOooo long! I have miss-ed you my lovely friend!

Then I'm going to say Oh MikeyFrankingRayGee, I missed your writing! The chapter was amazing and wonderful and wow! I cannot wait for more. Seriously!

Now imma finish of by telling you to check your emails, a d inbox me sometime dudette :D It's been just a bucket of gitnuggets without you!

*starts to dance an awkward find-my-feet dance with a shit-eating grin*

Spongebob Frankpants...I like it.

Oy, where'd u go? Missy, we're gonna have a run in if you leave me on this cliff hanger for much longer ;) hows u anyway? xx