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  • HarryPotterFreakie

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    You totally called him Milky Way...that has made my Monday awesome.

    ...and if Shelbie doesn't want Mikey, I'll gladly take him off her hands.
    October 3rd, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • bratney

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    Looks like I have finally caught up! But now there is nothing left to read until you update! So, I implore you, please update soon.
    October 3rd, 2011 at 04:48am
  • Bubbleloveworld

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    aww lovable milky legs!!! he has a crush awww spare me the agony and update already!!
    October 3rd, 2011 at 01:35am
  • Going with the tide

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    Brilliant chapter again Lyz! I'm glad my pestering was of use to someone, most people just find it annoying lol. Get in there Mickey! Was so funny, music lesson, someone worked out 'Na na na na...' by MCR on the guitar and almost the whole class joined in lol. Can't wait for an update, love this story. Am still begging library staff to let me use computers to look up mibba during school, knew there was a plus to bringing books in on time lol.
    P.S. Doctor who was great, worked out the question too! Can't wait for new series! xx
    October 3rd, 2011 at 01:30am
  • Aimbo

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    Yaaaay! I missed Mikey * goes off into Mikeyland*

    That was a great chapter. Mikey and Shelbie? Whoa. I thought he was still in love with Scarlet.

    Mikey the womanizer. Lol.

    I love this Lyz! This is the greatest sequel of all time!

    Loooove Amy :D

    "Get the choir boys around you, it's a complement I swear. I said ashes to ashes we all fall down I wanna hear you sing the praise, I said ashes to ashes we all fall down we've got innocence for days,"

    I just couldnt help myself.

    :D *dances like a jellybean trapped inside of a cauliflower*
    October 3rd, 2011 at 12:28am
  • Kiss_Me_Cryptic

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    Love Loved it! haha Mikey had his little awkward moment lol, adorableness !!! lol can't wait for more amazingness :D
    October 2nd, 2011 at 10:47pm
  • katiecharlie123

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    yay mikey. i need more of this its so amazin xx
    October 2nd, 2011 at 10:40pm
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    *stands up and applauds*
    I missed this story! XD
    AND MIKEY! What have you been doing you man whore? XD
    e\rktjgalirjihraiyhj and shelbie! ahhhh, this is so exciting!
    thank you for posting this again you wonderful wonderful wonderful person! :333
    And now to return to our msn conversation! XD
    October 2nd, 2011 at 09:27pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    ImFromMars - The cutest was easier for me to write than normal...that's because of the snow though. I love snow ^_^ I happily wait up for it when it's due :D The Claire thing was needed, mainly cause I likes me some drama! But also, for a big part of the story...but that's all I'll say for now ;-D I do like leaving you all on a cliffhanger though :D And as for the nicknames thing...I wrote a whole pageful of ideas to use the other day, so I don't run out :P

    Kiss_Me_Cryptic - I am evil...although everything for a reason as I firmly believe. The Claire thing won't be mentioned for a little while since I do love to keep you all in suspense...so I shall give you lots of MCRness in it's place ^_^ Adorableness - my new favourite word. <3

    katiecharlie123 - More is here :D Sorry for the long wait... :/

    Miss A - I officially take the blame for A-level failure! As for Gerard, well I have lots of ideas and a fairly decent plan for this sequel...so there will be lots of Gerard-ness ^_^ Poor Claire is something I agree with, even though I'm the writer who made her pregnant and unwanting of it - but there is a reason to everything...trust me :] Thank you for the comment last night though - you encouraged me to get rid of the block and get back to this.
    P.S. Doctor Who was AMAAAZING! I knew he wasn't going to die, since there's the Xmas special with Bill Bailey to look forward to...but it still kept me hanging! I also figured out the 'first question' just before it was revealed as 'doctor WHO...?' - I can't wait to see how the next series go on before he falls at Trenzalore - and the Silence are so coming back for him. I hate them, they scare me a lot - I have to cover my eyes! Amazing villain though ^_^ LONG LIVE MOFFAT, SMITH, GILLAN, DARVILL & KINGSTON! <3 <3

    LovesNocturne. - I love hearing what you think will happen/what you hope will happen. I know I say that a lot, but it's really fun to see the story properly from an outside perspective... FRINJA AND JOHAN BABIES!! Like, they could call it Frin-han...or Jo-inja ;-D Enjoy the new update...

    HarryPotterFreakie - I like the cold; we've had a mini-heatwave in Britain the past few days (we've been hotter than Madrid & Ibiza!)...so I just want my cold, windy, rainy, snowy British weather back already!! I included the 'Milky Way' bit for you...and I hope you like that he's back in the story ^_^ The Claire part is a part of a wider-arc to the sequel...so don't despair at the abortion depressiveness yet, there's a lot more to come *Evil laugh*

    ShelMoriahLiz - DOCTOR WHO IS OOOOOVER! :O :O :O :'( :'( But on the plus side, the last two episodes were AMAZINGNESS!!! I love that Amy is the Doctor's mother-in-law...that fills me with immense happiness and laughter :D I updated slow, but hopefully I'll get back on track soon enough - enjoy the return of Mikey for now!

    xlookalivesunshinex - *SINGS LOUDLY* "I'm taaaalking to youuu on msn, riiiight now!" Chapter four was actually kinda fun to write...despite the sappiness at the end and the depression at the start :P I don't even know how Scarlet will react to the Claire stuff yet - I haven't written it...but I'm sure I can try and make it good :P And Frank&Johan are sooo cute - it almost makes me nauseas :P ;-)

    DreaBrat - It is a little crazy to write an abortion scene, especially when I know it's controversial and maybe not all my readers will agree with it - I personally am pro-choice, and Claire going through this is for a reason...so don't worry, there's a plan in place for everything. Enjoy the new update!

    cutelilblondey00 - I'm glad you still love it; the abortion thing could possibly drive away readers. I feel it's important to include it though, and I'm pro-choice myself so I'm actually on Claire's side. It is messed up, but as I say a lot...there is a reason for everything I write in :] I hope I haven't scared you off too much though, and that you enjoy the return of Mikey in the new update!

    Bubbleloveworld - Bombastic is an epic kick-assery word! I approve!! :D <3

    Aimbo - You've been back a while, I don't care - WELCOOOOME BAAACK!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it so far...I always worry about my chapters, then I get comments like these and I relax at last :P "Ah you ruin everything, Oh - you better go home! I'm unbelievable - yeah...I'm undefeatable - Yeah! Let's ruin everything - BLAST IT TO THE BACK ROW!!" *Dances like I ate too many skittles, and now have Skittle-belly* I like surprising with plot twists...even if it means that for a brief glimmer, a part of Andrew was still around... :/

    kinkieboots - It's not wrong at all...in fact I'm flattered ^_^ Chapter 5 is up, so enjoy! :D

    FrankieSpanky - You don't need to apologise for not commenting...I suck at updating lately so we're more than even ^_^ I tend to research America-ness, but still worry...so I may be a tad vaguer about some stuff :/ I try to make everyone likable in the story, until a time when I'm bored and decide to unlike them - if I decide that anyway. It's more to keep myself amused :P And to try and keep it realistic too... I'm so glad you said that about the Claire thing though - that's what I was aiming for, so I'm glad someone got it :] MIKEY IS BACK!! And you get to find out why it took longer... ;-D Everyone liked that last line in Chapter 4, so it's proof I ended it right :] I'm not good with sappy stuff, but I seemed to write that bit oki, so I'm happy you all liked it ^_^

    You guys are amazingly patient and loyal...I loves you all rather large amounts ^_^ <3 <3 xx
    October 2nd, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • Going with the tide

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    Hey, where'd you drop off too? Been missing this. Update soon please :)
    P.S. DOCTOR WHO! Oh my goodness! What a great episode. I knew they couldn't kill him off, there wasn't enough media hype, but I was still unsure. Brilliant though, but they still haven't killed the silence off really have they? I'm sure that they'll be back. Thought it was a great twist! :) x
    October 2nd, 2011 at 01:24am
  • smelllikeisound

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    Once again sooo sorry I've not been commenting. I've finally managed to read them so hopfully I van get back in the groove of commenting.

    Reply to comment: I really wouldn't worry about the whole getting America info right, I doubt the people on here will be that petty. Yes you managed to make my day again but I will talk about that in moment.

    Feedback: Those guys are such babes taking care of her while she's visiting, I bet her medical bill cost a few! Their families seem pretty awesome too and I think Franks dad is awesome (: I'm not sure why but the way you portray him in this story just makes him so likeable.

    I really enjoyed reading Clares part, the way you wrote it all actually made it seem like someone was thinking it cause in most books/stories it's seems really formal and you don't get a feel for their personality. You really made it believeable and I liked it a lot.

    Need some Mikey now! Damn flight!

    Best scene so far was the part with Frank and Johan at the window watching the snow. It was so romantic and sweet. I really liked it.
    And the thing that made my day was the last line of chapter 4, he's thinks he's in love with her! How sweet! I really can't wait to see this story progress (:

    Update soon
    Loves x
    September 25th, 2011 at 12:40am
  • kinkieboots

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    is it wrong that i have started calling my boyfriend some of the names in this story lol ohh well never mind. :) i love this soooo much and i cant wait to read chapter 5.
    September 14th, 2011 at 03:08pm
  • Aimbo

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    Also, Im really suprised about Claire. Andrew is a bastard and he's still not gone completely grrrrrrrr. You're amazing, and so is everything you write!
    September 14th, 2011 at 10:05am
  • Aimbo

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    Go Frinjaa!

    God Lyszi this has been amazing! It's just, there are no words that are fitting enough.

    Happy late Mikey Fuckin Way day btw.

    I cannot wait for the next few chapters!!!

    Fuck yeah!

    "You're unbelieveable, uh, so un believable"

    *dances like the forks running away from the toasters"
    September 14th, 2011 at 10:00am
  • Aimbo

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    About to read it Lyszi! I'm so excited!!! I'm sorry I've been away so long.
    September 14th, 2011 at 09:35am
  • Bubbleloveworld

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    well i do declace the incredulous bombastic( actual word look it up) its very fabulous and magical
    September 14th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • cutelilblondey00

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    Minus the abortion...thats..wow. Thats messed up. and very...poor claire.
    September 13th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • cutelilblondey00

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    How was i not subscribed to this already!? WHAT THE HECKKKKK!? Ahh, caught up again and still....totally. in. love. <3 xx
    September 13th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • WoahBroWoah

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    i love it!!!!!!!!! i can't believe claire's getting an abortion!!!!!!! thats crazy! :(
    September 12th, 2011 at 11:25pm
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    CHAPTER 4 ALREADY!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
    Awwww, this really brightened my day :'3
    Your stories always do though XD!
    But oh orgkjrwlkgjwrlokj Claire o.o i'm so nervous to see how Scarlet will react D:
    But aoekldfjakdfjlk Frank and Scarlet are just the cutest :3
    I can't wait for more! :D:D
    September 12th, 2011 at 09:47pm